Nightmare Game

Fortunately, the world view and settings are pretty good. But I always feel that it has a bit of an AI flavor. The main thing is that some paragraphs, ideas, actions and words should not be repeated too much. Appropriate abbreviation and replacement will make people more interested in reading. Too much repetition will consume passion and desire.

The advantages and disadvantages are obvious 1. The AI feels a bit heavy in the early stage 2. There are too many sentences that are not but but types 3. Some content is repeated and too lengthy (especially non-important content, important content really needs repeated techniques to highlight) 4. The narrative technique is lacking, and many plots are not well reflected from the reader's perspective. For example, why do players know that Chris is a cousin of Wittrich? Advantages: The characterization is more vivid and delicate, the setting of 140 serialized NPCs is novel, and the five cities are used to connect the story to make the plot more compact. Although the shortcomings are obvious, I still like this story very much😘 so I give it five stars About the role There are two NPCs that impressed me deeply, one is 001 [Puppet Master] Scott Winston and 007 [Novelist] Wittrich K. Let's talk about Scott first. I would like to follow Yin Lu's view on his image: Very elegant and very very face-saving. Besides that, he is a qualified boss When they first appeared, Yin Lu, vk and Feilina were in danger in Thebes. After despising 006 and his group, they almost died in the base camp and caused him to lose face. However, they still solved the system tasks that the players helped him to complete. After Feilina asked all the questions and solved them, Scoo Te's answer is also very interesting, "You can also keep it." Although Felina was almost frightened to death when she said this sentence, and she imagined the scene of being cleared out in her mind, but from now on, it can be seen that Scott is not a domineering boss. On the contrary, he will give his subordinates a certain degree of autonomy and respect. This can also be seen from the martyrdom of the novelist. Wittrich put an end to himself in a fire and suffered a tragic martyrdom. Scott was fully aware of the whole process. He knew that Wittrich would no longer be the original Wittrich after his resurrection. He would wash away all the memories and forget the loyalty they exchanged for a transaction. Perhaps he would no longer be the most loyal supporter of Evernight. In addition, Yin Lu's suicide caused Scott to receive the ridicule of 003 and 004👎. If he had not made 22 million, his brother had made 8 million. With his love of face, the result was unexpected, but Scott did not stop vk and respected the ending Wittrich chose for himself. The above is just my personal opinion

(Slight spoilers, read with caution) Boss, you are so cool... I really like this kind of protagonist who looks a bit weak but is actually a boss. Moreover, I really like this free setting about bosses and NPCs. Unlike the dungeons from the player's perspective, players can choose between normal dungeons and "seasons" after entering the "Nightmare Game". The world participating in the season is the world where the protagonist becomes the boss after traveling through time: The plot starts with the main plot of exploring a certain truth. Basically, a report is a plot, and the "truth" reported is generally heavy (?) Yes The protagonist's life outside the season is either planning to write a report or on the way to write a report. Ing... The report has a literary style, and I was surprised to read the manuscript. Usually when reading manuscripts, I always like to quickly scan to find the key points. For this report, I will watch it frame by frame... When you meet players during the season, you will have a mission status. As soon as there is a mission status, I suddenly became excited because I felt a little happy watching it. Um. The protagonist's killing method is that of a weak scholar who stabs people neatly with a pen. It's so simple but so practical! Some of the interactions with other bosses are very funny, I'm talking about you W. K (funny. Jpg) Anyway, if you like it, you must watch it! Boss, please update it quickly. Every time I come back and see your novel, I feel empowered!

Five stars is very nice. Some people in the comment area said it was polished by AI. In fact, I don't think I can necessarily draw a direct conclusion. After all, it is true that people with severe literary youth will have this problem. This is the case for me. No one feels that repeating those very advanced sentences will have a charm. Anyway, I like such sentences and writing style very much. Yes, I can't see the stagnant feeling mentioned in the comment section. Of course, I only express my personal opinion. Overall, the author's writing style is more gorgeous. Metaphorically speaking, it can be said to be the heavy feeling of mist after a British rain. I personally prefer this style of writing. Everyone has different tastes. (There are spoilers below) The world view is very novel, and the identity of the protagonist is also very exciting. He is 006 with high authority. There is no specific main line at the moment. I probably have to go through each area one by one. It is similar to the feeling of running a map. If there are some highlights, I think it may be that many people are criticizing the protagonist and the novelist. Of course, this article has no cp, and it is all the readers themselves (but it is really good, text group 99). I only express my personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it. I just looked at it and found that what I said was not very rigorous. It does not mean that only people with severe literary youth will have this problem. This is not a problem, it is just a style of writing and writing habits. For example, I personally also have the problem of changing the format of the same sentence and using it again and again. Read on There will be a feeling similar to echoing the previous article (not quite, but I can't tell what it feels like). Reading such articles will give me a romantic (probably) feeling, like the soft music played when it rains, the letter with a faint smell of ink, or a blooming iris . I can't comment on whether the author uses AI, but I hope it's the author's writing style. But judging from the content presented in the article and my personal reading taste, the author's writing style is super good, and the setting is also very novel. (In addition, I am actually a very impatient person. Many of the books I followed for updates on Tomato later became impatient and abandoned, but this book is the only one that did not give up and continued to update even after stopping for more than ten days.) I really like this book. I hope the rating can be higher than 9 points. The above is just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it

Yin Lu, Scott Winston, Felina, Wittrich, the author writes so well, I really like them, they really hit my cute point, the protagonist's crazy energy is so touching, so cool! Also, I'm going to write a fanfic about Yin Lu and Wittrich. Please come and take a look. It's great.

It just so happened that I reached 100 chapters yesterday, so I would like to give the boss a five-star review as a congratulation. 😘😘 I think this novel is really well written and belongs to the Western fantasy genre. The world view is different from ordinary Western fantasy, it is very unique. The plot needs to be well-written and full of ups and downs (it also tortured me into a complete mess). The ambush pen was buried well and the hole was filled quickly. The plot is not draggy at all, and the writing is very moving. Judging from the frequency of likes on my comments on this novel, you can tell that this novel must have a bright future. 😳😳 I believe this novel can have a score of 9.0 Or even higher. 😘😘 The author is also very good. I have too many comments to reply to, and the boss will also reply to me alone in the chapter comments (I'm going to cry).

OK, next I will use the most upright, most straightforward, simplest, most understandable, most practical, most down-to-earth, least roundabout, least pretentious, least fancy, most to the point, most clean and neat, most frank and frank, most simple and simple, most close to daily life, least pretentious, not piling up gorgeousness. The vocabulary does not play with textual conventions, does not hide roundabout thoughts, does not make obscure embellishments, does not pretend to be profound, does not add unnecessary and cumbersome foreshadowing, every word is open and transparent, every sentence is sincere and true, the whole process is in plain language, there is no subtlety or concealment, every sentence goes straight to the core point, and the writing style is simple No pretentiousness, the expression is clear and concise, no pretentious foreshadowing, no ambiguous wording, no roundabout hints, no pretentious embellishments, straightforward enough to be understood at a glance, simple enough that everyone can understand, practical enough not to contain any empty words, neat enough not to contain any nonsense, frank enough not to hide any reservations, popular It can be understood regardless of age. It is hard-core and candid without being tactful, refreshing and direct without procrastination, simple and sincere without being exaggerated, easy to understand without being profound, straight to the point without foreshadowing, telling the truth without covering up, straightforward without being pretentious, plain and simple without being flashy, clear and clear without being vague, and frank without going around in circles. I tell you: it looks good.

It's really well written, and the worldview and setting are interesting. Join the protagonist as the story is told and learn about the world. The protagonist is a "journalist" who records the truth. As readers, we follow him to witness the truth. The place where the protagonist is always gives me a feeling of a British foggy city. All the truth is under the fog. They are always there, waiting to be seen one day. I really like the creation of the protagonist! If I'm too simple, I can't survive here, if I'm too indifferent, I'll feel a little uncomfortable, so this is just right... There's no right or wrong here. The Windsor incident is impressive. I think she should have a beautiful he and become the original her, the one with a bright soul. I hope the author can continue writing, Modo Modo!! I also want to know more about the world (laughs). I am very interested in Shanghai, which is obviously a Chinese-style city. By the way, I feel that the novelist and the protagonist are very interesting, so I'll give it a try (no)

The subject matter is well chosen, and I also like the perspective from which the story unfolds. I feel that the author is writing a very new kind of cool novel. The positioning of the protagonist in SCP is a very high-level causal law influence factor. The pace of events is relatively fast, so it is not too difficult to chew. The four stars are given because I am afraid of the author's pride, yes. Anyway, it's very interesting. I hope the author doesn't get tired, but don't take a break and write 8,000 words or something in a day (laughs)

The plot is quite interesting, the story setting is quite novel, and the male protagonist is also good. One star is deducted because the AI ​​flavor is too strong. The writing style feels very polished by AI, and some conceptual summary sentences appear repeatedly in very close chapters, but they are not sublimated enough, so the readers feel that the sentence patterns are wordy and repetitive, making it difficult to grasp the author's intention. Moreover, AI can easily lose context, so there may be minor contradictions in some small settings. If the sentences are written by humans, they will not be inconsistent subconsciously 🤦. This does not mean that AI cannot be used to write or polish. On the contrary, I think it would be quite good if AI can improve writing efficiency and allow the author to concentrate on plot conception 🤦. I just hope that the author can adjust the settings of the AI ​​agent, give the AI ​​team a better structure, and then regularly manage the context, and polish the text before publishing.