To everyone still waiting: don’t bother. I can’t revise it; basically everything has to be changed.
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When she opened her eyes again, she had become Yun Jin, the most beautiful woman in the cultivation world. Before she could even celebrate, three men kicked down the door, pinned her to the ground, and tore open her collar
She thought this was hell. She never imagined hell had eighteen more levels.
Sold, bought, treated as a cultivation vessel, refined into a puppet. She lay in the muddy water and vomited for half an hour. Then she looked up, saw that stunningly beautiful face in the mirror, and suddenly laughed.
“God, are you making it up to me, or just messing with me?”
Later, she understood. Whether it was compensation or mockery, it didn’t matter. This body was a gift from heaven, and she alone got to decide what to do with it.
A Chaotic Primordial Yin Body, one in ten thousand. It could devour the cultivation of others, strip away their innate attributes, and refine the marks of everyone who died at her hands into her own power.
Fire Mark, Ice Mark, Metal Mark, Wood Mark, Earth Mark, Lightning Mark, Wind Mark, Yin Mark, Yang Mark, Life Mark, Space Mark, Time Mark, Destruction Mark: thirteen marks, thirteen forbidden arts.
She climbed over the corpses of those men. Golden Core, Nascent Soul, Void Refinement, Mahayana, Chaos Supreme. Those who had treated her as prey all became fuel for the marks she bore.
Someone asked her, “Don’t you think it’s dirty?”
She looked down at the blood still wet on her hands and thought for a long time. “Dirty? In my last life, I knelt to make money. In this one, I lie down to kill. What’s the difference?”
The grief of the little characters is well written. Although there is a lot of pornography, there is no feeling of other humans, but there is a strong sense of pity? No, it's a very complicated feeling. The author's writing is very good, and there's nothing poisonous about it. But I think the psychological portrayal of the protagonist is too much. The author probably wants to highlight the sadness of the little character. If I give it four stars, I feel that I might enter a small dark room later.
I came across this topic again and would like to encourage you. The following personal views First of all, the writing style: OK (some of the psychological descriptions and analogies are very good and detailed), but there are too many modifying words in the writing, and the psychological description is too modified. What is not, what is like, what is like, what is like, it is understandable that you want to enhance the sense of picture and emotional transmission, but if the modification is too redundant, it will interrupt the reading experience and the perception will become worse. And in fact, simple writing does not necessarily mean that it is not good. Like line drawings, you can write well with one word and one sentence, leaving the rest to the reader's imagination and input. Plot progress: Very slow, very slow. It should be because the modifications are too redundant. Sometimes the emphasis is too much on expressing the feelings of modifications. In fact, it can leave some space for readers to imagine. Except for the psychological changes that need to be described a lot, there is no need to be too metaphorical in other aspects. Later, when we look at the relationship between the heroine and Leng, the description is really too redundant. At the beginning, he described the sadness in the past life and compared the past life with the current life. I found it quite amazing. The author also has something of his own. Protagonist: The portrayal is pretty good. Due to the slow progress of the plot, it can be seen that he is not the kind to make decisions immediately but needs time to adapt to this sudden identity. In fact, he was very patient in the early stage. This is excusable. The author wanted to portray an image of a person who does not have a big gold finger but endures humiliation. It's just that readers are easily frustrated and tired, and cannot immerse themselves in the experience. Supporting characters: The portrayal of the villain's success and the protagonist's frustration in the early stage are too detailed and too embellished. It is very sad to read. People like me who are easy to substitute just want to fast forward and fast forward. In the later stage, Leng Guyue, Yan and other money and so on are like human-machine, the characters are a bit empty, and the dialogues are also quite human-machine. You can see the difference but not much. After reading it, I only have one thought. The heroine is very frustrated. The idea is good, but the feeling of highlighting the heroine's intelligence and resourcefulness is not very strong. (I don't have much vocabulary, so I can only describe it this way. My culture is average) I hope that the author's writing skills will continue to improve, the plot will continue to be continuous, and there will be a lot of inspiration. I hope that the heroine will become stronger soon, and that the heroine's methods will become more and more sophisticated. As for psychological descriptions, modifications, and detailed descriptions, the author does not have to keep writing similar metaphors, metaphors, and personifications (meaning that modifications, metaphors, and personifications appear again in the text soon after). It is also good to leave blanks, white descriptions, and simple writing methods, or occasionally write like talking. I still hope that there will be more and different stories about this theme.
I like watching this kind of thing, it's so cool to be the protagonist 🥰
I don't know what kind of experience the author had when writing this book, but it was quite depressing and breathless. The subject matter is quite novel. This is the first time I have read this kind of description. I can't accept it, but it doesn't affect it. It's a good book. Come on, author. (Personal opinion only!)
Come on, author, love reading
The writing is really good, much better than those 9-point milk-dragon novels that are not very good at all.
This is the first time I review a book on Tomato, but I can only say that this is one of the few high-quality books of its kind on Tomato, and it is not even comparable to its peers.
Is this single, married, or a lily?
The fourth picture of the teacher is gone. Wuwuwuwu. XX
Is it okay to eat more meat? [Blowing a kiss]