Eerie Revival: My Sword and Shield Don’t Strike the Old

It's clear the author tried hard to write a good novel, but unfortunately, their basic knowledge is severely lacking. Many physics terms are used carelessly and haphazardly. It's suggested that the author avoid using physics terms as much as possible, or at least brush up on their middle and high school science knowledge. While being unbalanced in certain subjects isn't a problem, showing it all still negatively impacts the reading experience.