Jujutsu Kaisen: The Zenin Clan's Eldest Brother

The author has studied the original work very thoroughly, especially the name and role of the field set for Xia Youjie that I just saw. It is a very good fanfic in itself. Although many people think that this book has shortcomings and think that it is the same whether it has a protagonist or not, but I think this is one of the reasons why this book is particularly good. There is no arrogant protagonist, only a senior who everyone can rest assured. Focusing on the description of other characters except the protagonist makes me feel that this is really a world of magic, and the characters are not biased. I personally think it is much better than those works where the protagonist immediately changes the world and uses the system without brainstorming.

I've almost finished reading it, let me tell you my feelings. The author's setting is good, the naming style of the spells and fields are very suitable for the curse, and the writing style is not bad. It makes people feel comfortable to read, and there is no OOC. Overall, it is a good novel, but there are many shortcomings. The first is the problem of the participation of the protagonist. The participation of the protagonist is still a bit less. Even if you want to write a group portrait, it should be extended under the influence of the protagonist to reflect the role of the protagonist. There are several in the plot First of all, the protagonist is completely ignored to describe the supporting characters, so it makes people feel that the protagonist's existence is not high. Secondly, the protagonist's growth curve is deliberately downplayed, and he becomes stronger inexplicably. There is no specific explanation or only a few strokes to mention it. The readers have to figure it out by themselves. There is also a mistake that many fan authors make. If you want to expand the world view, to be honest, just write about local things. If you write too much, it will be easy to lose control, and it is easy to involve certain topics that lead to flow restrictions.

I feel like this book has many merits, but I don't understand why the rating is so low. The protagonist is well portrayed, and every word is just a gag or joke. The overall words and deeds are in line with the world view, and the character is calm and cautious. He chose the most reasonable way to deal with the corruption of the magic world, which is to join the top management and carry out infiltrative reforms, instead of resorting to force like childish "Long Aotian" The strength of the spells is reasonable, not supermodel, and taken from the original world view. There is no collage of settings from other works. The protagonist can develop simple spells to the extreme, which is very imaginative. The protagonist's strong physical fitness is also explained later. The plot design is excellent, the overall tone of the story is serious, the protagonist has changed a lot, and it is difficult to reconcile. At the same time, the influence of these people on the plot changes is reasonable. The story line has been changed without collapse, and after adding new combat forces, it has not formed a crushing trend. It can still describe the crisis and fierce battle of the situation very well. The transformation and strengthening of the characters are traceable. The description of friendship is warm but not excessive. The scale is reasonable and there is no random CP, which is more suitable for the taste of male videos. It can basically be said to be the best book I have ever read on a spell fic. I would like to add that the author's design of all new techniques and new areas is very good, and the names are also very particular. Some even have allusions. Occasionally, you can see the original book setting pictures provided by the author in the paragraphs and comments as a basis.

The original protagonists are not time travel or rebirth, but are born in this world. They are the same geniuses as the original trio. The story of four people attracting each other and supporting each other to grow continuously! We are close friends! It's like watching a story from another parallel world! Nothing out of the ordinary! ! It's not a mindless article that points out the spoilers of the script, but it's because of us that we can make up for each other's regrets, original style! The plot doesn't drag out and is very enjoyable to watch, and the writing is super good! ! I don't want to read the unfinished parts of the article. If nothing happens, I'll just check out how many chapters the author has updated today! I didn't want to read Unfinished at first, so I just checked out some of the author's updates! !

Although the original person in the astral body incident is still dead, overall I can accept the changes in the plot. The best change is the Xiayou line. The plot of the Shibuya Incident has also been filled in. The character of the protagonist is also very good. I look forward to the subsequent development of the plot.

What can I say, the plot is generally a bit bland, but I like the writing style very much. It is just right for bookworms who have been reading for more than ten years. Also, there is not much audience for this style of writing in Tomato. It is not suitable for Tomato. I feel that it would be better at the starting point, just like the book "Goblin Heavy Dependence" by the Twelve Heavenly Kings in 2025. The author's writing style is very similar to that book, but the plot is a little less interesting, but in general it is a good fanfic and worth recommending.

It's really good. The characters are not OOC, and it's very Japanese-like. The original characters can actually promote the plot reasonably and avoid the original tragedy without knowing the plot. They are not the kind of time-travelers who spoil the story every second. Yes, it's very good.

It's really excellent. I'll write a long review when I have time. Only such a novel can be called a fan, and it truly finds another way to make up for regrets on the basis of respecting the original work. I admire the author's restrained, sophisticated, calm and sophisticated plot design.

It's obviously very good-looking, but the addition of the protagonist changes a lot of things, and not without warning (spoiler alert!!!) Many people don't accept the four in the day, but I think it's good. The astral incident made the protagonist and Gojo grow up, and this is how the protagonist later reformed the magic world. Especially the current Death Return Chapter, the plot is getting better and better, and the plot development can be said to be the best among the fics I have ever read. Please continue to update it!

This book is okay, but I don't understand why a small number of people say that Tian Nei is dead (the original book seems to be dead as well), so I give it a low score. At least for fanfics, every fanfic should have its own points of interest, otherwise who would read a mediocre article with no points of interest? Although this book does not always revolve around the protagonist, the appearance of the protagonist seems to be a way of maintaining it, and it feels a bit like a group portrait, which is good. The protagonist's emotions have always been stable, but his contribution to some things is huge. There are no awkward points or super strength like other fanfics, which also shows that the protagonist is not invincible, they are on the same line. The author did not impose a role on Minggo because he was his protagonist. Instead, he gradually integrated it into the story, as if he really was a character here. Not to mention that I just like this kind of light and affectionate protagonist. The appearance of the protagonist has a better effect among the original three people. Reason and calmness are like synonyms for the protagonist. Cheers to the author! Although I am only an ordinary reader and may disappear at any time, at least now I will read this book. This book is rated higher than you think! The numerical value is just a number. The real rating is determined by the readers who read the book.