Transmigrated as Long Aotian's Love Rival, Forced into a Love Triangle Every Day

Ok, this author is also writing about awesome Foklas, okay, I just told my whole family to call me to resign, to drop out of school, and to read this novel full-time at home, okay, my little Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how beautiful his writing is? After reading it, my depressed child is no longer OD, and he no longer cuts pig's trotters. I want to eat 200 servings of this awesome Klass every day. Doubao helped me generate the author's bikini photos, and Doubao told me tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome, and os finally allowed me to eat something delicious. The author updates twice a day which is very fast. I must give it a thumbs up and support it, it's so sweet to me, and it's so well written. Long Aotian and the male lead team are all awesome Klass. Yu Ge is awesome! It's awesome, ok, ok, I just wish the author - one, two, two, four, four, forty-six, seven, seven, forty-nine.

This book is very well written, everyone has a distinct personality and their own characteristics, and the heroine is not brainless and just relies on others. She stole others by herself. This is the most satisfying novel about immortality that I have read so far. Seriously, if you see this, give both of them a thumbs up (⸝⸝ɞ̴̶̷ ·̮ ‹⸝⸝ᐡ) ⟡.·

How can I put it this way? I'll give it four stars. In fact, the writing style is average. The descriptions are too repetitive. I hope it can be improved. Then there is the logic aspect. It makes me feel a little uncomfortable, but overall it's okay. At least the heroine is really strong [Like]

I saw that Sword and Soul was discarded, and I originally wanted to give it three points, and one more point for the laughs at the front. What I don't like personally: I feel like the plot of the story keeps repeating, and what some characters say and what they think in their mind keep repeating. I feel like the writing is not very good, and the psychological emotions I wanted to portray were not captured. Sometimes the description of appearance is a bit embarrassing (referring to the heroine in other people's eyes), but it's okay And the heroine is cowardly, but she also likes to show off, and all of them are describing various emotional lines. At least I see that there is no career line at all (no heroine takes the initiative to practice) Then he pretends to be awesome and sometimes pretends to be a little embarrassed (for example, in the ring, he was relaxed and embarrassed, and suddenly said, "I decided to eat fish for lunch today") Later on, there was a bit of hard play. Advantages: There are a lot of laughs in the early stage, and they are funny The cover of this novel is very beautiful. I read it because of the cover. Novel subject matter Come on, author. If the article is revised, I will probably read it.

The heroine is not a villain, but a righteous leader. The author gave her the best talent. She is much better than the male protagonists, which is very satisfying. But the male protagonists are very single, they are all paranoid and have no characteristics. Every male protagonist suddenly becomes paranoid in a strange way and says, "I will never let you go." Emotional scenes are meaningless. The author has a sense of love for girls. Although sometimes the words "boy and girl" are used inappropriately, it has been improved. It is really cool that the heroine is the strongest! He is a funny but just Aotian

I also came across a very, very good-looking article. When I read this article, I immediately went into a thunderous spin. It made me feel like men will menstruate after reading this article. He is also very awesome. This author, I am also raising a banner for you to see who dares to be your enemy. A thunder spin. Kneel down on one knee and say to the author: "You successfully caught my attention. It's also the reincarnation of Lao Tsai. 🤣It's so beautiful, I want to do it for you Raise the flag. I'm bringing all the little animals to support you. 🐊🐢🐍🐛🐔🐦🐧🐤🐣🐥🦆🦉🦅🐗🐺🐴🦄🦋🦔 🕷️🐝🦟🦇😺🦂🦐🦞🐡🦀🐠🐟🐳🐬🦈🐋🦑🐙🦎 🦖🦕🐅🐆🦓🦍🐘🦛🦏🐪🐫🦒🦘🐂🐃🐄🐎🐖🐏 🐑🐐🦙🦌🐕🐩🐈🦢🕊️🐇🦝🦡🐁🐀🐿️🦃🦜🦚

Overall, it's pretty good, the plot is well controlled, and the heroine is also strong. It still looks very enjoyable❗️ I just feel that the early stage is good, and the heroine design is also acceptable. She is strong and unobtrusive, but she is actually reliable and quite vivid. It felt a bit boring at the end, emmm, and the Xiong Jing segment was boring. I only got interested when I was writing about the event. After the event, it was Xiong Jing or something like that. One moment it was interesting, and the other moment it was boring. The portrayal of the male protagonist was pretty impressive at first, but in order to respond to Xiong Jing, the male protagonist's design really became very ordinary, very common, and very boring. I feel that except for the sculpting at the beginning, the male protagonists later have the same feeling. . . It's just that they doubt themselves first, and then fall in love with them, and then their persona becomes just like Xiongjing's and becomes featureless. Four for baby Yu Ge. I hope Yu Ge will get better and better. (V) (°,,,,°) (V) Because after watching it, I felt that it was weird to want to watch it and not want to watch it, so I slipped away T^T

It does describe the beauty of the heroine in a large space, and there are many golden fingers for the heroine. The author loves the heroine in the novel very much, and wants to give all the good things to the heroine. The heroine is the strongest. Regarding this aspect, the heroine is very cool. What is not good is that the author's writing style is a bit immature, and most of the emotions about the male characters are biased. I feel that the paranoia of the male character is a bit too much. I can describe more other emotions. The author is probably not very good at writing emotional dramas, but the growth of the heroine is wonderful. She is very stupid and indifferent to other people's feelings. I hope that the heroine can accept all the characters or not use all the single arrows. It will also be delicious.

The book written by the author is really super, super, super beautiful. This book completely touched my heart. It hit me very quickly, and I didn't have to wait for a long time. It was very enjoyable to read. I really like [Love] Yu Xiaoge, who is charming and strong and never lets herself suffer (our Yu Xiaoge is a bit of a bad kitten) The author is also very good. He updates very quickly. When I wake up every morning, I forget about everything. The first thing I do is read DaDa's book. I feel very happy. DaDa is also very cute [love]. I like to use all kinds of emojis. I have moved a lot of emojis from here and will say hello to us in the morning. The author's other two books are also good to read. Read them both. The writing is awesome. It's so beautiful. Let me read it.

It's very beautiful. It's equal. The writing is also quite smooth. There are a lot of foreshadowings. The heroine is very happy and not frustrated. However, I think the follow-up development may be a bit difficult to write. I hope it won't break down or stop updating.