Starting Labor: I Am Building Ships and Establishing a Country in Western Australia

I've just read the third volume. The plot is quite good, and it's a good read. However, in other aspects, many places are a mess, especially in various details. No wonder this book cannot be rated highly. It is reasonable for readers to give you two or three points. This book is assisted by AI, and the author probably put it up without much editing. Many people can feel the weird sense of nonsense. The same is true for many descriptions, like playing with your fingers without restraint. There are a lot of them in the front, but less in the back. The description of time is not uniform enough. Except for character dialogue, you can see hours and hours and minutes being used together. Another point is that the character Zhao Hu is written in such a way that people are speechless. He is a veteran character, but his personality is brainless and irritable. He jumps out every time, and then hesitates to speak. It seems that he deliberately wrote a brainless villain who comes specifically to provoke and ridicule. And the protagonist is very tolerant of him. There are other unexplained places. For example, various factories are only arranged near the port and are within the attack range of ships. It is obvious that the enemy is threatening at any time. There is also no mention of simplified Chinese characters in education. There is another point, like the opening scenes, although there is a certain explanation, the military quality of the miners who just got their guns made me almost think that this was a battlefield to resist U. S. Aggression and aid Korea. This book has no plug-ins, it is purely about time travel.

It is a very imaginative book. The beginning describes the miserable conditions of the chemical industry. The protagonist has changed. This group of poor people's slave life rose up and resisted, paying countless lives in exchange for the freedom of the Chinese workers. If you fall behind, you will be beaten. Future generations should take this as a warning and stop going to Southeast Asia, Dubai, and Africa to be slaves...

Except that the pace is a bit slow and the male protagonist has no cheats, which slightly reduces the excitement, the rest of it reads very smoothly and is worth a read! After Chapter 300, it is not as good-looking as before. Facing his compatriots being enslaved, oppressed and massacred by the Japanese, the male protagonist has become a bit wilted. He has lost the awe-inspiring righteousness, decisiveness in killing, and courage to fight...

Five stars, full marks! The writing is fluent, the wording is sophisticated, the frame is plump, and the start is steady, one shot to the end. The spring breeze is swaying, and the willows are swaying in the wind, with the front protruding and the back warping. The beauty of the country is heavenly and fragrant, which makes people want to stop. [Praise]

The writing ideas are novel and clear, and have the feelings of our Han people about our nation and country. The writing is smooth and natural, and the characters are vivid and vivid. This book is fully worthy of my above evaluation.

The writing is quite good, and the author is very attentive, but I don't know why I don't like the setting very much. Maybe it's due to the historical background. Most of the stories I've read before were during the founding of the People's Republic of China after World War II. Although the country was suffering, it was relatively stable, but this was the late Qing Dynasty. It was very uncomfortable to watch my compatriots being bullied by the Japanese! ! ! But I still give it five stars.

It feels like an AI skit, but there is still a gap between the words and sentences used by real people. But the overall framework has indeed been put together. Many novels have been written about the Chinese establishing their country overseas. I wonder if the AI ​​ate it and then spat it out.

Dear little fairies, this is a good review template. Don't read the following, which is all nonsense. Because this fairy is too lazy to write good reviews for every product, she imitates netizens' praise templates. However, whether this product is of quality or style, this fairy likes it~~ If she doesn't like it, she will be very angry when she receives it, and then this template will turn into all kinds of nagging complaints. Naturally, she will not spread this praise to give you a reference for shopping friends. This product is still excellent. It comes from a lazy and easy-going fairy who only likes shopping and does not like to write reviews. He only wants to exchange points. The things are packed tightly and the packaging bubbles are also very good. They are crystal clear and every bubble is full. After receiving the goods, I squeezed half of it and put the remaining half away for next time. Every bubble can make a crisp sound, and there are absolutely no dumb bubbles, which is unmatched by ordinary bubbles. No way, no way (ー_ー)!! Someone has read it from the beginning

Not bad, you can take a look at [Working on draft][Eating Melon] Regarding age, he is already 30 years old when he appears. Why not change it to 16 years old and then lie dormant for 4 years? It would be great to appear at 20 years old with an mature look. Not to mention enjoyment, how long can the body function last in that era, how long can it be in power, and there are no descendants. There is a 10-year difference in body, mind, and physical health. I just want the author to change this. This poisonous point is too irrelevant. Everything else is pretty good [currently in progress] [in progress] [in progress]

It is a very interesting war novel. There is no system or golden fingers. The protagonist is an ordinary young man who rises up from Western Australia as a mortal and slowly and steadily devours the entire Australian continent. It is also worth mentioning that even though the unification of Australia has been completed, the protagonist does not want to be an emperor. I am very satisfied with this. After all (there has never been a savior, nor does it depend on a fairy emperor. To create human happiness, we all rely on ourselves!!)

It's pretty good. There's nothing wrong with the plot or setting. I'm looking forward to the follow-up [Like]

Great! I originally planned to read Golden Chapter 3 and then go cook, but I forgot.

Well written, clear logic, courageous and resourceful!

Very good, multi-dimensional narrative, reasonable farming layout, grain and grass

This book is very interesting. It talks about the founding of Tu'ao. It doesn't have any cheats and it seems quite reasonable. The main reason is that this name bothers me. I suggest that I change my name when making paper.

It's pretty good, the rhythm is right, and it's not too watery.

Very good, it has a certain degree of rigor and is not too brain-consuming.

The main character is well designed, I'm optimistic about it.

It's okay. I haven't found any poisonous points as of now. It's a pretty good fictional historical ration article.

This is what the real Chinese people do during time travel. Good idea. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

It's well written, and the plots aren't too outrageous or outrageous.

The plot is reasonable and the IQ is online. I am convinced by the rationale and evidence, and I highly recommend it as a good book. ——17-Year-old bookworm

A very good book, although some details are not in place, but overall it is a good novel about the founding of the People's Republic of China. I give it six stars. Very pretty. .

The plot is smooth and there are not many character descriptions, but everyone's settings are relatively reasonable. There are no awkward-looking plots and no emotional scenes, which are good reviews.

The author's writing is good, and I hope to see more interesting follow-ups.

It's very interesting. The author's writing is very immersive.

Very interesting, logical and steady progress

Very good, organized and pretty.

I have finished reading the Western Australian Self-Government volume. It is definitely a good book on overseas nation-building. I saw someone talking about AI. If AI could write like this, I would print out the novel and eat it.

After reading it, I have been following this book for the past few days. It may not be perfect, but it is in line with my heart. [Like][Like][Like]