Spirit Cage: Ultra Beast Force

This book is really good, especially the part depicting Lu Bu's fierce battle with Sun Wukong over Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai was indeed too strong; if it weren't for Darius's outer-range attack and Noxus Guillotine, that M4 6x scope spray would have been fatal.

It's definitely a bit of a simp, but otherwise it's alright. The protagonist's emotional disorder could be explored in many ways, and I hope the author uses that well. There was no update yesterday; I wonder if the author was looking at the work I mentioned for inspiration. Keep it up, author! You yourself said you wouldn't abandon the book. I quite like the premise.

Hmm, it looks pretty good! The logic is clear. The downside is the update speed; updating only once every few days is too slow! 10,000 words a day would significantly increase the rating. Many works rated 7 or 8 points start at around 5 points! Most authors update at a rate of 3 chapters a day; this author is still too slow!

That's well written. There are plenty of women out there; there's no need to go out of your way to lick their boots

Author, everyone has their own preferences; this is just a platform where you can write the stories you want. I really like the saying, "I live in my own world; let others' opinions be." Regarding your family of origin, that's a choice you couldn't make, you could only accept it. But when you have the ability, you can and should seek your own path in life. Life has endless possibilities, be strong! Finally, I wish you happiness and good health in the future!

Keep it up, that's a great idea. Hope it gets better and better.

Not bad, but the individual's abilities need to be quicker.

Well written, keep it up!

Keep writing! Just block the trolls, but speed up the pace to show off to the main character!

Hopefully, Bai Yuekui will be a single-female-lead story or one without a female lead. The current setting seems quite novel within the Ling Cage fanfiction genre. Keep it up, author! 👍