Billions of Insects, Sweeping Through Another World!

Generally speaking, there is a reason why so few people watch it. Normally I would just write it off, but I really love the Zerg novel so much, and the author's writing is pretty good, so I'd like to make a few suggestions. 1. When many enemies come to investigate, they will see some scraps of meat or leftover bones, and then feel something is wrong. But this kind of thing does not exist here in the Zerg, and they have all been eaten long ago. The author can write that the worker bees have finished cutting down the trees, and then others will feel that something is wrong when they see the desolation here. 2. The chapter about beating the toad is a bit weird. It says that the toad's acid almost killed the cockroach, but then it says that it poses no threat to the cockroach. But if I remember correctly, cockroaches, as a Zerg type with complete Zerg genes, should not be afraid of this biological acid at all... 3. There are many similar inconsistent descriptions in the article. For example, after defeating the elite team, it was said that Nest No. 1 Had been bombed, and then it was said that the injured Zerg should be treated in Nest No. 1. If the author has time and plans to continue updating, he really needs to re-read what he has written. There are really fewer and fewer orthodox Zerg articles now. I hope the author can continue to update [please take a closer look]

Too much nonsense (￣へ￣), the rest is okay_(:з∠)_ There is no nonsense behind it, it looks good. Later, the protagonist drifted and wasted gene points. Even though the system said it was impossible to succeed, the protagonist created one to try, and then wasted 5,000 gene points to create a humanoid monster. What combat power does a humanoid monster have? Does the protagonist want a maid? But he has no body. The protagonist has recruited a bunch of goblins again. It is the first time I see a time traveler pity the goblins [face covering] unlike the Zerg. It was fine in the early stage.

Gua! It's a very good-looking story about the Zerg in StarCraft. Although the values ​​have been reduced a lot, it's still reasonable. After all, if it were written according to the background of StarCraft, I don't know how invincible it is.

I remember that if worker bees keep eating, they can grow to the size of a truck 🧐🧐 (other organisms can also grow very big)

In summary, it's okay. The level should be above 8.5, But there are a few places where I have some doubts🤔️ The current display should be in the context of Western fantasy. Why is there a template suffix called Veteran of Hundred Wars? It feels weird. Would it be better to continue using the numbering? And I feel that it is not necessary to build heroic units when resources are not abundant in the early stage. It is also a substitute heroic unit. It's useless to assassinate with high-end combat power like a wyvern. The lower-end ones can be defeated by relying on the sea of ​​​​insects. In Chapter 42, the gap between the Holy Light Judgment used by the Purifying Blade team and the charge was very obvious. The protagonist's decision was to rush forward. Shouldn't he try to stop the loss? And when the teleportation circle came out, why did you immediately think of squeezing them out instead of dedicating part of your troops to try to destroy the magic circle? Why do you throw hounds instead of poisonous banelings when fighting wyverns? If there are enough "trebuchets", would it be better to throw a batch of banelings first to break armor and corrode them, and then throw hounds? Also, cockroaches are not very expressive in their long-range capabilities, and are more likely to burrow into the ground and engage in close combat. Come on, the author [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

For my own book, I can't give it a five-star rating too much [currently in preparation]

Okay, it's a StarCraft article, or a Zerg article. I hope that in addition to ranked battle units, we can also see cooperative commander units and other units in the game, such as (cooperative commander Abathur's) Guardian (long-range anti-ground crab), Devourer (anti-air), Rough Beast, Primordial Worm, Bile Ejector, and "StarCraft 1" Defiler (Scorpion). Personally, I think it's hard to imagine what the original military units look like. I just hope that the units are all in StarCraft.

Don't be too shabby when you say it's AI. I think the author writes very well and quickly. I'd like to give it a thumbs up. Regarding conflicts, it's fine as long as it doesn't affect reading. The author writes so many words in one day that it's normal for him to forget the previous content.

The only poisonous point is about the acquisition of genes. There is no situation where the genes cannot be completely acquired if part of the body is damaged. First of all, the genes in all cells are the same. There is no situation where the genes of cells in different parts are different. It is just that the gene expression in different parts is different, except for symbionts and parasites, so it is a bit... Uh

It is recommended that the author review what he has written after finishing writing.