The Supernatural Revival: Every Vengeful Ghost I Control Crashes

Yes, although there are not many words, the plot is quite good. It is decisive in killing, ruthless and self-interested enough. There is no inexplicable plot of helping others. I hope there will be no more in the future. For the plot behind the protagonist, if you want to communicate and cooperate with the superiors (don't join!!!), You must take the initiative. Even if you cooperate with the superiors, you must learn to refuse to mention them. Don't just accept any rewards from the superiors. The protagonist must have a clear long-term goal. If the goal conflicts with the tasks given by the superiors, you must give priority to your own goals (I just refused, what do you think about me?). I would like to give you some advice. After meeting a ghost at the beginning, the protagonist should not insist that the setting of the ghost is the same as that of the mysteriously resurrected ghost. I think the protagonist can make guesses and then collect information to verify. This way, more words can be written and the plot can be smoothed out. The previous plot can be changed.

Xiao Yi's heart sank. The pressure brought by the old man in Mao suit in front of him was too terrifying. Seeing this, Xiao Yi knew that he might not have a chance if he didn't take action, so he immediately opened his mouth, and the solid red ghost mouth ghosts immediately spread in all directions. This was already the fifth layer of ghost ghosts that Xiao Yi used with all his strength. The old man from the Republic of China opposite didn't seem to see the creeping ghost. He slowly opened the zipper, and the ghost style emitting a strange yellow light was revealed. The thick yellow ghost was like a beam of light, breaking through Xiao Yi like a hot knife cutting butter. The ghost was fiercely inserted into Xiao Yi's ghost mouth. When he pulled it out, Xiao Yi was horrified to find that he could not activate any of the supernatural power of the ghost mouth. Supernatural suppression! What a terrifying supernatural suppression. The terror of the old man from the Republic of China in front of him was beyond his ability to contend with. He had to run, he had to run. Just when Xiao Yi wanted to use his only ghostly ghost face to escape, the old man opposite him teleported in front of him and slapped his ghostly face with an old tune from the Republic of China. Xiao Yi was horrified to find that his ghostly face had also entered deathly silence. "Are you kidding! How can you not resist for even a minute? Who are you?" The old man sneered and said, "Young man, maybe you are indeed the best in this era, but in our era you were not good enough. I wonder if you have heard of the name Guidiao Wang Teng." Xiao Yi's heart was shocked, "Ghost Tiao Wang Teng! The person in charge of Chengdu City during the Republic of China, and the best among the seven elders of the Republic of China, Ghost Tiao Wang Teng" It seems that I can only use that thing, Xiao Yi thought in his heart, and moved his hand towards the gold bag, where was his last killer move "Ghost Cup"!

Advantages: Strong promotion ability, okay personality, relatively decisive in killing. Disadvantages: It is not pure darkness (I think) but also has a conscience and a kind heart. There are also some ink stains on the previous plot. He is also a high-moral protagonist, and others were almost beaten to death by evil ghosts. After the weapon drops and the protagonist understands it, guess what, you are right, you must send it back to him! I didn't know 666, so I thought I was reading something about helping others. It doesn't matter if he doesn't grab things, he still has to return the things he picked up, and this weapon is still very needed and very awesome. Well.

Tomato's Strange Resurrection is a very well written fanfic. The pace is fast, the protagonist's strength improves quickly, the plot is well grasped, the protagonist is well portrayed, and it is not as depressing as others. If I say it's a fun type, it's very similar to Don't Fault in Tai Sui. It seems very fun. If you keep writing like this, maybe there will be a place for you in the New Gods.

It's pretty good. In the past, those fandoms all used to be private ghost masters, and it was a common practice for them to have their butts stolen when they were not free. To be honest, it is better to catch ghost controllers with golden fingers like pig's feet than to catch ghosts. The ability of ghost controllers is not too high, and those who exceed the standard are revived.

If you have any comments, please post them below, I will reply when I see them. The content previously written on the paper has been changed. In the future, only supernatural events will be recorded on the paper. Thanks for everyone's criticisms and corrections 🙏 Subsequent supernatural events will increase, and the strength of captain-level characters will also increase. In the future, there will be more ghosts based on the protagonists of those horror movies.

It was pretty good before I got to Zhou Jingchuan, but I stopped watching it later because I felt that it broke the setting of ghosts, because they are just a fixed program and have no thinking. The replacement of those who can express complex logical language broke the setting of ghosts. Even the wishing ghosts, kitchens, ghost newspapers and so on in the mystery are very straightforward, without human thinking. But each author's setting is different. I value the pure setting of ghosts. Overall, it is okay.

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Not bad! Nice! I like how the protagonist is so decisive in killing and pursuing the goal of becoming a god.

Although it feels good, it is my misconception that the protagonist fights with ghosts every time. I feel like it is a difficult battle every time. When the ghost fights with the protagonist, it suddenly becomes yuppy, and then it is fused by the protagonist, but it feels ordinary. In addition to fighting ghosts, each game is a bit 55-free no matter how many ghosts are fused, but fighting ghost masters is not bad.