A Reaction Story: Starting with Tales of the Dark River

It's quite interesting, but the author focuses on too many scenes with other supporting characters. Supporting characters have their own lives, but when their lives are mostly focused on the protagonist, can the protagonist still be called the protagonist? What's more, when reading a fanfic, you're basically reading a story about the heroine and her man. I hope the author can write more about the relationship between the heroine and the man who admires her. The plot is generally good. The author should master the rhythm. Watching the first world feels like it will be the same. It's a long story, so there's actually no need to write too many admirers of the heroine. I counted 8 admirers. I think some people can add some drama to the details, otherwise the plot will really advance very slowly. I think four or five admirers will be enough.

I want to see Situ Xue's

The first story is quite interesting, but I still want to ask my baby, when will the second story start? [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

They are all very interesting, but I am also looking forward to the updates of the second and third parts. I have to say that the author is really good at writing😍😍😍

It's super beautiful. I love reading it. The author's writing is super good.

The author is great, the movie viewing series that is being updated, can the cp be Poria vs Chongzhao? It will feel more exciting Can you update it more?

I'm a little curious as to when it will be finished. I'm looking forward to it.