This Is Wrong, Big Sister! Please Don’t!

Haji's mother was polluted by the way of heaven, as if she had awakened the evil mother system and had her body taken away. Haji's mother also tried her best to follow the plot. The redemption part deserves 5 stars. There are three shortcomings. 1. Haji's mother's transformation can be arranged more reasonably. For example, after the company went bankrupt and her parents divorced, Haji's mother was unable to take care of the male protagonist under the double blow of career and marriage. He caused a lot of troubles, and vented his anger on the male protagonist, which caused him to suffer from depression due to bullying, parents' distrust, lack of companionship, and lack of contact with his sister. 2. The heroine's change was too sudden. Although there was foreshadowing at the beginning, the more she wanted something, the less she could show it, but she couldn't be so fair. Stylized, it's basically the same thing ~ the male protagonist's performance ~ the heroine's mouth is curved, you can write something about the strange emotions flashing in her eyes, the eyes blink lightly to hide the dark thoughts, you can't just say nothing, the corners of the mouth are curved, 3. I left a chapter on the gentle big sister earlier It's the woman who shakes the red wine glass. The sexual intercourse of a woman involves more than just beating, but more restraint and humiliation. Just beating someone is not called a man, it's called a punching bag. The pace is too fast, and I can't feel that the 10th chapter is about to end, but the redemption part is well written, keep up the good work, author

What I mainly write about is the daily life of Yu and Qingran, which is very, very sweet. Let me protect you again: this is a GB article. Although they are siblings, they are not biological siblings. If you can't accept it, you can return it. Under this statement, if it doesn't look good, it won't be stamped on your xp if you don't like it. Please don't write negative reviews. There may be some content in the later plot that is not very right. Please don't read it with your brain. Throw your brain away before reading. Let's declare a very, very important point again. Don't leave negative comments. Don't leave negative comments. If there are any mistakes or typos, please direct them to the author.

Good looking. . . I cried when I saw my younger brother suffering from depression and his older sister accompanying him all the time! However, my sister's sudden change later made me a little uncomfortable, but it was still very, very delicious. I'm really looking forward to the relationship. Please continue to update the author. It's so delicious =ᗜωᗜ=

Ayu really cried to death when he was depressed. In the early days, his parents loved him so much, but later on, when he became more and more busy at work, they didn't understand and scolded him. He was bullied in school. His sister also had her own career and life, and he was wandering alone in this world.

After his sister left, his parents changed. I don't understand why.

The first part is very sweet, at least I like it very much. The last three years actually I can't stand anymore. I would rather accept that my parents died suddenly and then there is an evil distant relative👿, but my parents have become unknown to me. Finally, I wish the author happiness.

I watched part of it, and it was really good. The early stage was very sweet, and most of it was about the plot between the heroine and the hero. The age difference is almost 8 years, we have a family relationship with a bit of fun and lightness [Chigua] [Chigua] The relationship is also very perfect. I really love the author to death. The writing is really very beautiful [Adoration] [Adoration] Finally, I urge you to update more. Please update more from the author. I finished reading this in one go [Send my heart] [Send my heart]

It's so cool, I can't see enough. I don't agree with your point of view. I personally think this spaghetti should be mixed with No. 42 Concrete, because the length of the screw can easily directly affect the torque of the excavator. , You know, when you smash it in, it will produce a large amount of high-energy protein in an instant, commonly known as UFO, which will seriously affect the development of the economy, and even cause certain nuclear pollution to the entire Pacific Ocean and the charger, you know, furthermore, according to the Pythagorean Rule Reason, you can easily infer that the artificially raised Tojo eagle chicken can capture wild trigonometric functions, so whether Qin Shihuang's section is radioactive or whether the outrageous Nth power has sediment, it will not affect the meeting of Wal-Mart and Welcome in the Antarctic. By the way, Rouse, do you have any more in your draft box? [Crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

The foreshadowing of daily relationships and so on is super well done. The writing is amazing and very touching. However, it is not recommended for sisters who are too tearful. There is a section that will make you cry to death. Sisters who are losing weight can take a look (it's very interesting and beautiful! The author's writing style is also super nice).

I haven't watched it for a long time. Is there a lot of changes in the past? When I did the second refresh, I found that many of them were deleted. It's like the plot where the male protagonist's parents put a lot of pressure on the male protagonist and caused the male protagonist to collapse. I can't find it.