Su Yan wakes up one morning and discovers he has transmigrated.
The good news: This world has dungeons appearing, people awaken supernatural abilities, and he’s gained a cute girlfriend.
The bad news: He has none of the original owner’s memories.
To keep his identity as someone who transmigrated a secret, he can only do his best to cover it up.
He absolutely cannot let Shen Yuan find out he isn’t the original Su Yan.
Shen Yuan is reborn. In her previous life, she was only an F-rank Awakened, the lowest rank.
When the world underwent a great upheaval, she struggled desperately to survive, but her death was inevitable.
Given a second life and the memories of what lies ahead, she makes her plans early. This time, she has to cling to the strongest backer she can find.
To that end, she spends two years carefully setting things up, inventing a “boyfriend who’s always working out of town” and convincing everyone around her that he exists.
Everything is ready. She just has to wait for her powerful backer to show up.
Then Su Yan arrives.
The protagonist is trained by a reborn woman to be the way she likes.
It's alright, but when will the protagonist expose him? We've reached over 38 chapters now, and it's only now that I realize he has a problem. And the more I watch, the more it seems like he's being trained.
Keep up the good work, author! It's great, but the probability of spinning the wheel needs to be adjusted, and there should be more variety. You can't just have cola as the only white quality item, right? Aren't there any other options?
Overall, it's quite good. The pacing is just right, not too fast or too slow. Some small details are also very interesting. There are some logical issues in some places, but a lot of the content is still in the setup stage. As long as the plot holes are filled in later, it will be fine.
Yes, so far there are no major flaws, and the plot and setting are very interesting.
The premise is decent, and the plot is passable. However, it falls short in handling some details and logic, as well as in pacing.
When will the truth come out, and then the female lead will be dumped? Just thinking about this plot makes me crave more! 😏
Train the male lead to your liking
The plot is good, but the power level distribution is a bit confusing.
It's pretty good. The plot and setting are novel and interesting, and it reads smoothly with great action. The fight scenes are exhilarating, but it's a bit short. Do you have any similar recommendations? 😄 What does this mean? If you don't watch the inexplicable angst and plot twists for a few days, don't tell me you're trying to whitewash it.