The Hehuan Sect's Guide to Legally Raising Lolis

The protagonist is quite cute, very cute like a kitten, which fits my idea of ​​a tsundere shota. The plot is okay, but the writing needs more work, and there is still a lot of room for improvement. There are too many descriptions of supporting characters. They can be properly described to enhance the connection of the plot, but there are too many descriptions in the later stages. I turned several chapters later and most of them were describing supporting characters. I read the novel for the protagonist, not the supporting character. The central point of a heartthrob novel is the protagonist. If the author cannot regard the protagonist as the center of the world of the novel, then I hope you will not agree that this is a heartthrob novel or a group portrait novel. Can the title be clearly marked? In fact, some people will still get angry. Keep up the good work, author! The writing is still good. I hope it can be updated more and describe the supporting characters less. If this is a group portrait article, then just think that what I said above is just nonsense. I am very sorry.

OK, what this little author wrote is also very misleading. OK, men see menstruation, women get crazy when they see menstruation, they are so happy, so happy, hahaha, this young man is being polite. Baby Lili is so cute, a very understandable little kitten, and the tsundere cat is delicious (actually, I don't think she is very arrogant, just the kind of duplicity that makes her lose face, but she is very understandable. Once she saw it, she knew it was Bao who was embarrassed, and then she wanted to kiss him). The wife was so cute, she wanted to bury her face in the kitten's belly and kiss him. I am a mama who likes to see descriptions of the main character's baby staring at her, but maybe it's acceptable if there is a large section describing the appearance of the supporting characters. Anyway, overall I feel like it's a very satisfying novel, it's very interesting! Overall it's quite funny, but the group of little bastards in the front really pissed me off, and later on I hope they kill the village (just kidding) (actually it's true) Currently, my favorite stocks are Time Traveler (because he is a funny guy hhhh) and Libao's brother. Others are just average. I feel that Libao is a super facial person who will blush to good-looking people, but he can't feel the spark of love. Natural slag (?) The author's XP is also at the same level as mine, okay, vine hehehe, water-alkali hehehe (although it's not fried yet)

It's very, very beautiful. I can clearly feel that the author's writing is getting better and better, and he is making progress. He supports and encourages [love] [love] [love] [love]. My favorite is the master and my brother. The two of them get along with Mo Li. It feels very cute. This work The author and I also met our close friends in the mountains and rivers, os: How can someone understand my xp so much, goddess, goddess, I love you, just like a mouse loves rice🐭 I must vote for this little flower to help her dream of putting food on the table. It is still too delicious in the year of master and apprentice😋

I'll go, I'll go, it's really shocking and delicious, I just chased it to the end. To be honest, I feel that this book review is really not worthy, it is too low, I really recommend it, and I hope the teacher can work harder. One day, 10,000 copies will be released and I will be shocked to death [Blow kiss]

Dear little treasures, please give me a 5-star review, [loving][work in progress][work in progress]

The protagonist's character is pretty cool, and the setting is super touching [laughs] The writing style fluctuates between high and low, and sometimes it feels like I'm reading a running account. The protagonist doesn't have much of a role to play, and it feels like I'm writing a group portrait, which made me super tired. This type should be suitable for those who read quickly. If they slow down, they will feel verbose and logical loopholes [Thinking] Come on, author, and look forward to the following chapters [Sending my heart]

Nice! I hope there will be another young lady or young boy who can post stickers with the protagonist [Adoration]

I particularly like the author's great descriptions of scenery and characters, especially the descriptions of when I first came to Hehuan Sect. I fell in love with him right away (others don't know, but I fell in love with it anyway). Also, hehehe, it's the cute shota! [Adoration][Sending Hearts]

Good-looking, love to watch the pink-haired shota, a heartthrob [admiration]

The setting is quite good, but the writing style is a bit poor. I look forward to improvement. I hope the author uses less "not... But" and metaphorical comparisons.