My Brother Harry's Sister Has Caught the Eye of Slytherin's Heartthrob

Nice! Oh my god, the writing is very detailed. I feel like everything is traceable. There will definitely be a lot of high-energy scenes in the future. I hope my best friend can quickly give me 800,000 words. If it is 8 million words, it will be no problem.

The plot is very interesting, and everyone is very consistent with the original work! It's very prominent in fan fiction! The heroine is smart and cunning, and her strength is neither too strong nor too weak. She is really a very cute baby [Adored][Adored]

Yyds family members! There are so many hp fanfics, but this one appeals to me the most! It makes up for a lot of my regrets about HP (⑅˃◡˂⑅). It can be said that the emotional line between Xiaolong and Daisy has no industrial saccharine at all, only natural and extreme preference. Even in the Cold War, the two still care about each other and protect each other. (Actually, it didn't take long for them to reconcile.) Daisy's character is very much like a cunning and smart cat, and Xiaolong only likes her. He regards Daisy as a family member at the beginning of the chapter. The author's writing style is also extremely good. In short, it looks good! Highly recommended!

Potter's sister x Platinum Malfoy, a two-way boy's love, Snape's heart-warming cub, the original plot is seamlessly connected, sweet but not greasy, it is the ceiling of HP fandom. The advantages are outstanding: the character's OOC level is extremely low, all interactions are in line with the behavioral logic of the Hogwarts teenagers, and the contradictory setting of "Potter's sister enters the snake yard" is written in a logical and self-consistent way; the disadvantage is that some daily routines are too watery, and I look forward to the follow-up Horcrux and war plots.

Overall, it's okay, but I feel that the author likes to use some more classical Chinese (or more archaic) vocabulary, such as "is", "knowable" and "if", which actually don't matter, but I personally recommend changing it, because the background of the fanfiction is in the West, and this language habit will make people feel very fragmented [smile]

Put on a black suit and work for the Dark Lord. His youth was drowned in the glory and darkness of his family, A black suit replaced the wizard's robe, and a sad face replaced his smile. Who put Malfoy on his shoulders, making him unable to straighten his back after being so proud. Pure tears fell into the dark pool, Just like a pure man, he fell into this dark world with no one caring about him. No one listened to his pain, and he could only cry alone in front of the mirror. He is the dusk that cannot fall, and the dawn that cannot light up. His goodness is not pure enough, but his badness is not thorough enough. He was Malfoy first, then Draco.

My goodness, even if the writing is good, the content is so rich! Each character is very restored, which solves the problem that I still want to read HP after watching it, but I don't want to re-read it. There are a lot of details, and they fit very closely with the original work. It's simply not too good-looking.

I have read both of the books written by Da Da. Da Da's writing is really good. Da Da is really busy, so the updates will be very slow. Please forgive me. Da Da is also very good. Da Da, I will follow you for the rest of my life!

The setting of the heroine is particularly good, and Draco perfectly fits the image in the original work into the world of text. The whole text is not laggy, and basically retains the plot direction of the original text. It is a book that can be checked by both the original book party and the movie party. It is really well written.

This book is really very beautiful. All the meanings in the original work are difficult to reconcile and are very satisfactory at the end. It made me cry when I read it, but it is really sweet. This book is very beautiful, very beautiful, and really worth reading. I have written several comments about this book. It is really beautiful. The characters are well created. I am a person who has relatively high requirements for books and cannot be cruel, so this book is so sweet and the extras at the back are very beautiful. It makes my heart sweet and warm [snickering][smirking][smirking][smirking]