With a Crippled Spiritual Root, I Protect My Husband and Become an Immortal

What should I do if I dress up as a passerby in a fairy tale? Pei Qing said: First find a space, then find a wife - wait, how come this wife is the cannon fodder genius who died tragically in the original book? No, you have to protect it. So while he was refining elixirs, drawing talismans, forming arrays and refining weapons, he doted on Gu Yunshen to the sky. In the original book, White Lotus wants to seize the opportunity? Waiting in the trap! Green tea wants to cause trouble? The evidence is embarrassing! As for a certain ex-destined partner? Sorry, my Yun Shen can't even remember your name. It's so refreshing, so sweet that you'll lose your teeth. After reading it, I just want to say: Where can I get this kind of Taoist companion?

Overall it's pretty good, the protagonists are sweet and easy to relate to. However, there are quite a lot of repeated language in some places, so I suggest you delete some of them or describe them in a different way. Then Brother Xiao's emotional description is not recommended so much, and it is a bit abrupt to intersperse it. From beginning to end, he is just a secret admirer, and the protagonists do not owe him anything. Come on! You have already written very well! (=^▽^=)[Blow a kiss]

The overall plot and plot of the story are quite good, but there are a lot of strange word orders and a lot of small loopholes... Keep up the good work!

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Sweet article, keep up the good work

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Qi refining, foundation building, elixir formation, Yuanying, and spirit transformation

Like it, suits my taste.