Top! Transmigrate into a book! Protect the husband! Both are pure, both are pure, both are pure!
Pei Qing: a useless five-element spiritual root and a nobody gong, who awakens memories of transmigrating into a book and possesses a petal-space golden finger.
Gu Yunshen: a prodigy with a single water spiritual root, the vicious cannon-fodder shou, born with a furnace physique, doomed to die horribly in the original story.
They spent six years together in a small town. Then, one day, Pei Qing awoke to the fact that he had transmigrated into a book.
Looking at the cool and dazzling Gu Yunshen before him, Pei Qing remembered the story's ending: Gu Yunshen would have his opportunities stolen by the white-lotus shou protagonist, be betrayed by his scumbag senior brother, and be reduced to a human furnace before dying horribly. He was furious.
Why?
Why should a thief become fate's chosen one while a good man turns to bones?
Pei Qing activates his petal space and masters alchemy, talisman-making, formations, and artifact-refining, blazing a path to a powerful comeback.
He reclaims every opportunity that belongs to Gu Yunshen, tears apart the white-lotus transmigrator, and slaps the face of the blind, scumbag senior brother.
A useless five-element spiritual root? It's the greatest Chaos Root in all history!
A nobody destined to die young? He's the Immortal Venerable who defies fate and is crazy about protecting his husband!
In this life, I'll dote on my prodigy shou and protect my dao companion!
I won't be a nobody or a side character. I'll be Gu Yunshen's one and only dao companion and his strongest support!
What to do when you transmigrate into a minor character in a cultivation novel? Pei Qing says: First, pick up a spatial dimension, then pick up a wife—wait, why is this wife the cannon fodder genius who tragically died as a furnace in the original book? No way, I have to protect her. So, while refining pills, drawing talismans, setting up arrays, and forging weapons, he spoils Gu Yun Shen rotten.
Overall, it's pretty good. The main characters are sweet and it's very easy to ship them. However, there's a lot of repetitive dialogue in some parts; I suggest cutting some or using a different style. Also, I suggest reducing the amount of description of Xiao Shixiong's feelings; it feels a bit abrupt. He's always just a secret admirer, and the main characters don't owe him anything. Keep it up! You've already written a really great book! (=^▽^=)😘
The overall plot and storyline are quite good, but there are many strange sentence structures and minor plot holes... Keep up the good work!
I like it, I like it, I like it
It's beautiful, so beautiful! 💕💕💕
Keep up the good work, sweet romance!
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful
Qi Refining, Foundation Building, Core Formation, Nascent Soul, Spirit Transformation
I like it; it suits my taste.