I Run the Moon Plan Hongyuan, Got It?

It's well written, and the interaction between the protagonist and the black beasts is very cute, but I'm not sure what the author's main plot is, as it's more about daily life.

You know, baby, not only are all the 12 black beasts here female, but this Ga La Ge Mu is in baby mode, and interaction is not required. You can easily take them down as long as Asashiga gives a mysterious little gift (jade pendant). You said Gala Ge Mu is not like this, shut up 😠 No one has ever helped me and treated me as a human being. I don't know if the authors of too many books are too tired. They all basically have the same routine. Although it is normal for novels to have routines, they still need to foreshadow it. Even if the black beast is not popular, it would be too ridiculous to be able to return to his heart with some care. You can be loyal because of your personal charm, but you also have to She has strength. If Carmen had no ability, there would be no Moon Project story, and she would only be regarded as a lunatic by urban people. What is the difference between the protagonist and others? Every character can be friendly to others, and there can be sidekicks A, B, and C. The protagonist has nothing special, so why should he be used in this story? Do you want a person with the same name?

Overall, it looks good (it's all sugar) But I still feel that there are some problems @yanxiao (only my personal opinion, no malice, welcome to point out any loopholes) 1. Wei's weapon should be a crutch instead of a shield; Wei's side effect is that his body will always feel cold (after all, Yang Tang also feels very cold in the summer in the plot) 2. Did the smoke war start too early? The Tobacco War ended - Lobotomy Corporation was opened - the Seed of Light was launched - the library was opened - the total of being exiled was not 12 years, right? According to Jia Mu's current age, the old age is not reasonable, right? 3. As a gang, Thumb shouldn't be able to hire a close person, right? There is also Roland's precognitive eye that recognized Valencina in Chapter 65, but logically this kind of information should not be leaked.

It's watchable, the writing is okay, the emotional scenes are okay, the characters, combat abilities, and fighting scenes are a little bit toxic but within an acceptable range, the setting is a bit problematic but it's barely rounded, overall it's remarkable, if you can accept some minor bits and pieces, it's still worth watching.

How to say it? It's a monthly story about a mirror world. The plot is pretty good. There's a good chance that all twelve idiots are women. It's quite novel and interesting. If you don't like effeminate characters, please don't enter.

Everything else is fine, except that the protagonist is aboriginal, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable [Thinking]

Very good book, but still inconsistent First, "Since I was born, no one has ever treated me like this." Then "I thought of XXX's XXX, they were all "abandoned" and "useless"" Finally, give me a jade pendant Basically the same

The writing direction is good, but the writing style needs to be improved. If it is not good, you can use AI appropriately. Don't repeat it too many times in description. In addition, you can leave suspense at the end. If you get stuck at that critical moment, it is better not to take up too much of the monthly theme.

Although it looks good, the yellow button on the back really makes me want to escape, but escaping is useless, so I came to urge the update. What a delicious novel! The progress bar is about to reach the end, and the "Update" button is about to appear - but is it really so? (Press pause) Here, please allow me to pay homage to the audience and ask you to take the time to listen to what I see. ⭐Ah, the legendary writer⭐ ❤️The gospel official of words❤️ 💔How long will it take for you to update a new chapter💔 📚Relive history! 📚 🌊Cross the ocean of text and data traffic🌊 ❤️Bring the latest updates right in front of my eyes❤️ 🤫The process of reading your text🤫 🎓Always reminds me of the happy time when I was a teenager studying🎓 🤲🏻If there is a one in ten thousand chance, you can update ten chapters a day🤲🏻 🥰My victory will be certain🥰 🥵In the name of readers, I will invite you to step into the prison of breaking news.

A+~ A good monthly fanfic, give me five stars for support [Chigua]