Slow Transmigration: The Beloved Concubine Keeps His Favor All to Herself

Overall, I actually quite like it. The world view of the first world is time-traveling, which is considered a classic time-travel episode. However, because the author's writing style is quite interesting and not the type of mindless quick-travel, I still quite like it. But I don't know if the author can see it. I personally have a few suggestions. The most obvious thing is that the length is too long. It is said to be a fast travel, but in fact it is more like a slow travel. This is not a good rhythm for readers who like to read fast-travel novels, and it is difficult for the author to retain more readers who like to read fast-travel novels. Secondly, I feel that the author wants to highlight the intelligence and transparency of the heroine through detailed psychological explanations of many characters, but sometimes it is because he is too persistent in this way of description, so it seems to be a bit too hard. In fact, I personally feel that it would be better to leave some space, and everyone may feel more comfortable reading. But no matter what, the writing is very good, and the writing style seems to be well-founded. Come on, I look forward to seeing you! [Blowing kiss] Come on, author, I have tied up with the newly updated chapters today, and it is still very interesting [Blowing Kiss]. I am looking forward to your next world. I also want to ask the author of the world of Qing Chuan, has he thought about imagining other brothers? I really like your writing style, and I think it would be good to write about other things too.

Super super pretty. I've basically read all the various cross-dressing and variety film and television articles on Tomato, and I don't know why I really like the articles about dressing up as Li Shi. This article really touched my heart. Although it is a new article, the author's writing style is very good. It is neither a cliché love-at-first-sight story nor a story about intrigues and intrigues, nor is it a bland and calm text, or a space-spirit-quan-system text. The author perfectly balances the fact that I don't like to watch love at first sight, but I also really like to watch the ambiguity between the male and female protagonists. Although I am just a partial favorite now and I don't know if it will be an exclusive favorite in the future, I can almost ignore it in the process of reading the article. The relationship between the two is gradual, stretching and slender like running water. The heroine seems to be weak, but she actually has the upper hand emotionally. However, she is not like the kind in many novels where the heroine tries her best to gain favor, but then remains unmoved and treats the person like a fool, giving people a sense of drama that she has calculated but failed to understand. The heroine is more of a follower of the flow and rarely designs it intentionally. She is scheming but also emotional, both ways make people feel that if I were the male protagonist, I would also like her. It is a very natural development.

After watching the first one, it is good-looking. I like to see it through and through recently. I really like the heroine's character. She is smart and rational. She also likes to pretend like this for a lifetime. The two of them live a good life. The heroine also has a good sense of proportion. There is a touch of warmth and melancholy. It is not sad but has some. It's a good place to cry. Maybe I have a low tear point, so I can't read sadistic articles, but this is the kind of emotional crying. I quite like the extras and forums. I read that the author said that many readers think it is too long. I will write about it later. This may be a point of criticism, but I don't think so. It's very long, and I still felt reluctant to leave it when I was about to finish it. This article is exactly what I like. The female protagonist is sensible and pretends to be from the beginning to the end. There is a touch of warmth. There is also a parallel world. It feels like it would be great if the male protagonist could meet the female protagonist. Maybe I like to read the consummation. If you have a hard time walking through it, this is it. I don't really like the kind of dog training. The kind of strategies that stop pretending and start to reveal their true colors. You have to let the hero and supporting characters know the plan, or the hero wants to explode a big thunder before he dies. I feel very imprudent, and this is not bad, unless it is the kind of clear revenge.

I cried during many chapters, not because of the abuse, but because the author's writing style is so delicate, and the emotions and tension between the lines are very moving. Even though the heroine is acting, her acting is so real, her acting skills are so good, and her emotions are so touching. The heroine never suffered any injustice and always got what she wanted. Super super pretty. This comment above is limited to the first world. The second world is really unbearable at all. Before Chapter 12, the AI ​​flavor was very strong, but after Chapter 12, it became less interesting. The second world is boring and tasteless, and so is the previous relationship with the prince. If it was an act, it was very fake. If it was real, it would be even more fake. I didn't like the male protagonist's character either, and the emotional line came very abruptly.

I particularly like the first world. I think the best part is the one before the Queen's death. She really regards Qing Yue as her sister, which is one of the few sincere feelings in the harem. The Queen's portrayal is very real, and describes a mother's unwillingness and heartache after learning that her son has become stupid. She loved Honghui very much and was thinking about Honghui's future until her death. Qing Yue was also a very good person. She would find a cemetery for Aunt Song after her death, and would make reasonable arrangements for the whereabouts of the elderly in the house. She is careful, smart, and can grasp small details... Yin Zhen. . Sultry type

I just finished watching the first world. It's really beautiful, very detailed, and the characters are well-drawn. Especially Fujin, she held Qingyue's hand before leaving, and they both called each other sister, which made her cry really hard. She loved her children very much. After Honghui became stupid, she gradually relaxed Honghui's schoolwork. For the sake of his children, he would put down his dignity and get along with Qing Yue seriously, giving up his rights step by step. The interaction between the three little ones is also very heart-warming and loving (well, it should be the fourth little one). Everyone will not dislike Honghui and get along with him in a serious and friendly manner. I didn't regard him as a fool. I thought he just had a slower learning ability and could just wait a moment. Qing Yue was sober and rational from beginning to end. Whenever I'm about to fall in, I'll wake up instantly after seeing Qingyue's inner monologue. She is very good. She will bury the Song family in a beautiful place, transfer her old grandmother to a leisurely post, and wipe Honghui's sweat carefully. Yinzhen Bar is very boring. Is it a bit too fast to fall in love in the second world? After experiencing the slow progress in the first world, I feel that the second world is so fast. Although they are life-and-death friends + good looks + mutual pull, it feels weird to fall in love with the male protagonist quickly and deeply. I just saw the female protagonist feeding Shen a cake, and it felt like she was acting coquettishly suddenly, which was not smooth and weird.

It's okay. The first small world is not over yet. It's a bit like slow time travel. The author seems to like writing flashbacks. Maybe it's because of my reading habits. If there are too many flashbacks, I tend to get upset. For example, when talking to Fujin, other people would get distracted from time to time in reverse order, which made me feel a bit weird. I also have some small suggestions. Maybe I am not a professional, so you can adopt them as appropriate. That is, when describing, don't go too far into describing that I don't love xx. It's time for me to establish a character. I'm pretending here, and I'm acting here. In fact, readers will probably understand this kind of straightforward psychological activity once or twice. If it happens more often, it will seem to emphasize what I am doing. (It's a bit similar. A top student is very powerful. She can solve a difficult problem in three ways to show that she is very powerful. It is different from the description of her being the first every time, adding a lot of psychological activities to the question, which is so simple that it kills people.) I don't know if I can describe this feeling. Maybe I have seen similar characters. In Gongdou Wen, there is also a character who does not fight, does not love, and is sober. If there are too many "narration-style" feelings and psychological activities, you will not be so immersed, and you will not seem so "smart". The more you order, the more delicious it will be🤔 However, there are no other bad points, and the overall performance is pretty good. My feelings may also be because I have seen similar ones and my reading habits, hahahahahaha.

Very nice! ! ! ! I watched from 11 o'clock in the evening to 2 o'clock in the morning. My baby looks so good. I like watching this type of movies. I like the male protagonist doting on the female protagonist! ! The heroine acted like a spoiled child and I started to feel soft [staring] [staring] ah ah ah, but later I remembered that this is a fast-travel novel, so how to deal with it ah wow, I really like this small world, I hope the author can keep writing it, it is really beautiful, this subject matter is so beautiful! The author is awesome. I love the author so much! ! Hey, can the author make this small world longer? I really like watching this [love] [sending heart] [sending heart] Don't end it so hastily. The more you look at it, the more afraid you are that the next chapter will be the end of this small world. I love watching it. It's beautiful. щ٩(*^㉨^*)۶ [][]

My God, after I opened this book and read it, I was really shocked. She is so beautiful!!! I rarely read this kind of historical genre before, because I always felt that the impressions of these historical figures in my mind were too stereotyped, but the writing in this book is really natural and beautiful. Although the heroine seems to be weak, but every The steps are all within the expectations of the heroine, and the hero is slowly immersed in it, hoping to torture the hero later. Everything seems to be going too smoothly for the hero, and he wants people to break his calm appearance. Hehehe, anyway, the heroine's baby is happy. It's really beautiful. Why can't the author complete it all at once? Looking forward to it. Hey, I thought it was really interesting at first, but later on I felt it was too simplistic. The story felt too long at the end, and it was basically about taking care of the baby, and I felt that it was against the male protagonist. In fact, I think it might be better to torture the male protagonist. From the middle, it has been talking about how much the male protagonist loves and cares about the female protagonist from the perspective of Fujin and other people. I feel like it keeps saying it, but I read it from the perspective of the reader. From the perspective, I don't feel how special the male protagonist is to the female protagonist. The male protagonist still goes to other people's yards as usual, and the children are still born normally, and the female protagonist seems to have others. It feels that the male protagonist's love is not very obvious, and he loves the female protagonist too little. It is more that he feels loved. He is loved, so he also returns a little care, but I don't think this is the love of the male protagonist. I don't know how it will develop in the future. I hope it will end soon. After writing it, I feel a little high and low. But the author's writing is still very good, keep up the good work

It looks good, I hope the heroine can stay awake all the time [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] It would be nice if the male protagonist could be tortured a little, but don't let the female protagonist lose her horse [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]