Ready or Not: A New Officer Joins the LSPD

After reading some chapters, I really felt that the characterization of this book was unique and awesome, as if I was on the scene. The growth of the protagonist and the light of humanity have always bloomed in a natural manner. As for the environmental background, it can be seen that the author has really worked hard to study it. His knowledge of firearms is quite good. In terms of contextual grammar, the word order is indeed in line with European and American English word order. I translated it while reading it in my mind, and it felt very natural. It's been a long time since I've seen such a good-quality book on Lianyang Persimmon.

It's very well written. It's one of the few Ron fanfics in Tomato. It's not overly serious and entertaining. It's very comfortable to read and gives me the motivation to keep reading. I hope I can keep writing. There's no problem at the moment except that it's too slow. The plot is a bit watered down. It's hard to say what the problem is, but it feels like it's not as good as before. Oh, by the way, there is another problem, that is, the chapter title of each chapter has nothing to do with the content. To be honest, it is difficult for others to be interested in reading it, and readers cannot find what they want to read. I feel the AI problems mentioned by other readers. I personally have no objection to using AI to assist writing. After all, this is Tomato.

This episode is really amazing. Two old friends laugh away their past unpleasantness at this moment. Faced with the loneliness of the deserted college life and the longing for their classmates, although there are thousands of words in their hearts, they are all silent. They naturally converge into a sentence of "Genshin Impact". The two lonely souls have reached a resonance at this moment, "Genshin Impact is awesome".

Yes, a delicate and detailed police life, full of life stories and tension, a very humane law enforcement officer [laughing] The novel does not involve too dark things, and it is a good read, but the reality is not so good. The law enforcement recorders released in the United States show that many police officers like to find trouble and "create" income for themselves, but I have to say that many people are indeed guilty [Thinking] I can only say that the law enforcement environment there is really bad. Getting better and better, and the future is promising

@Carlos Author Dada, I think the subject matter of Dada's novel is very good, and the writing in the early stage is also very attractive, but it seems to have slowly changed later, from a clear narrative style to a style mixed with lyrical style, so I would like to make a few suggestions. I hope the author can take a look. 1. The first is the repeated use of certain words, such as "deeper, heavier" here. Excessive use greatly affects the perception. If it were me, I would put this deep emotion that cannot be described in detail and try to reduce the number of repeated uses. 2. Then there is a more detailed description, which will naturally increase the reader's sense of involvement, but linking it with other things will reduce the perception. For example, the deep experience it brings becomes very separated from the first link, which makes people feel like walking to the top of the mountain and suddenly falling into the valley. 3. Finally, there is a detailed description, which often slows down the progress of the story. An appropriate brief description is better.

Background: How should I put it? I borrowed the background of the story of "Being Ready", but I didn't completely copy the game plot and wrote it in my own style. Character description: Among them, I think the author's delicate description of the protagonist is very refreshing. The description of the protagonist is not only a positive description of what the protagonist has done, but also a profile from the perspective of more supporting characters. This writing method is rare in Tomato. The description of the little characters is even more penetrating. Plot: The plot is also advanced step by step, and there is no sudden feeling. The protagonist does not have a mature mentality from the beginning, but has a step-by-step growth and learning process. The inner struggle of the protagonist when he takes away the life of others for the first time is also in line with the character image. Summary: It's worth updating. It's a new masterpiece on Tomato with endless potential. PS: Author, please keep updating [shy]

Needless to say, very lucky But there is a catch. Some of the daily-oriented plots have a strong AI flavor, but the main plot is still very interesting and should have been written by real people. It is speculated that the author has used AI assistance, so please be careful if you like daily suggestions.

A good book, no doubt a good book. This is definitely a breath of fresh air in the Ready to Stand fan fiction. The character descriptions are very three-dimensional, and the writing style describes one flesh-and-blood character after another, which is breathtaking.

Very detailed! The same goes for disadvantages! Can you imagine? Each chapter contains a lot of psychological descriptions, inner struggles, and link characterizations. . . . I would like to say that the above-mentioned authors all write very well. They are not the hydrological descriptions of AI that repeat or change a few adjectives, but are truly thoughtful descriptions that are in line with the current environment. It's just that the author placed too much emphasis or explored the inner drama too much and ignored the continuity of the plot, which made it look really tiring. Regardless, this is indeed a good book! I give it four stars!

It has Chinese-style simple character descriptions and relationship descriptions. In an environment where guns can be legally fired, sometimes people will forget the chaos here and become more harmonious. Obviously this city will be like Hell's Kitchen in terms of DP entry volume, but there are so many warm communities and emotions that it feels like it's fragmented.