The Evil Axolotl's Ark Adventure

The writing is good, very comfortable to read, and the daily content is very good. However, people who have never played Ring World may not understand the race of cute salamanders. The author can choose a chapter to introduce it [Love]

This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4s would have died if they hit A1 and strafed. Apart from that, I rather appreciate Zhuge Liang's use of flowers. A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Guoshan: "Young man, don't show off your arrogance in front of your brother Liang" shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowing fighting scenes that make you feel like you are actually there, and the character descriptions are spot on! The writing of this book is excellent, the plot is touching, the ending is unexpected, the content is resonant and thought-provoking, the plot is interesting, the characters are vivid, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are like being there, the author's depiction of people's hearts is meticulous, especially when describing the gourd boy to save the Transformers, Sun Wukong's inner excitement and fear are vividly expressed. I alone think Wu Song 000

I see human feelings in daily life and vicissitudes of life in the scenery. It is not like a novel, but like a prose. There is not much of a main line. It is more about the conversations between characters. It looks good and is very comfortable to read. I hope the author will continue to persevere [Thoughts]

Daily life is quite heartwarming, but it's still the same sentence. The main character's coming over is not very meaningful. Nothing has been changed. I can only make some original things and then follow the main line. Those who like to watch daily life are lucky, but there are still some things that should be found when it is difficult to calm down. It is edible.

It's very interesting and very to my liking. It's very enjoyable to read. I feel that the author's writing style is like a wisp of wind, with lightness and casualness, and a hint of chivalry. There are few places with thick ink and heavy writing, but the emotions and images are in place, a bit like prose. Although it does not give a detailed explanation of the protagonist's abilities, it does not affect the reading, because this article does not feel very hardcore. If you impose an explanation, it will feel a bit abrupt, unless some battle scenes will be added later that require special explanation. As for the image of the old movies, as a skipper, I can't comment on whether it is OOC or not. I just felt that it was very appropriate, comfortable and vivid after reading it. This is enough for me.

If it involves the fusion of world views, please mark it in the introduction. Don't trick people into killing them. In addition to the protagonist, the cute newt, you also have to include Millie, right? I have to ask. Other than that, there's nothing bad about it. I get along well with Sui Pian. It's warm and can touch people's hearts. The writing is pretty good, but overall it's on the lower end of the super-large category.

Preliminary summary: I have little experience, and my comments are for reference only [laughing]. I have no intention to offend anyone who has different opinions from me. If you have other opinions after reading my comments, please don't take it to heart [crying]. Just treat it as nonsense. After reading it for half an hour, I can say that the author's writing style is very good [laughs], the characterization is quite full, the world view is well integrated, the rhetoric and lyricism are all intact, and the transition of the plot is also very natural. It can be called a first-class article written in 🍅! [Sending Hearts]

The plot is vivid, the plot is interesting, the characters are distinct, Xiao Jueming is very cute. This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu fighting Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 will kill A1, except In addition, I appreciate what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang," which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowing and immersive fighting scenes, and the character's personality The character description is spot on! The writing of this book is excellent, the plot is touching, the ending is unexpected, the content is resonant and thought-provoking, the plot is interesting, the characters are vivid, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are like being there, the author's portrayal of people's hearts is meticulous, especially when describing Calabash Baby Q to save the deformed Sun Wukong's inner excitement and fear were vividly displayed during King Kong Q. I am the only one who thinks that Wu Song was right to kill Qiao Feng Q? If Jia Baoyu hadn't stopped Zhang Wuji from Q, how could Yang Guo's hand be cut off by Guan Yu? Zhuge Liang wouldn't have gone over the cliff to fight a hot battle with Linghu Chong Q, etc. All in all, this book is interesting

Isn't it said to be a transformation essay? Why do I look no different from the girl I was originally? [Holds face] Isn't this another scam with a title full of female sex at the beginning? But since the author's writing is pretty good, I'll give it 4 stars.

It's rare to find a fanfic about World and Porridge, and the writing style is quite good. The theme is still the Sui family. Other similar stories are either about Sui Thirteen or following Rhode Island as outsiders. It's rare to be so familiar with the Sui family and not be a member of the Sui family.