Clan Cultivation: Starting with the Spirit Beast That Guards the Clan

Why are 3 out of 5 children born with spiritual roots? The probability is so high! Shouldn't spiritual roots be very rare? 🤦 The geniuses in the story seem like idiots. They can't win a competition, but they refuse to admit defeat and get their meridians destroyed. Just for the sake of pride, they let their cultivation stagnate. Is that normal?

From what I've seen so far, it's alright, except for the realm divisions. There's a Purple Mansion realm, and the lifespan jump between each realm is enormous. Just starting out in Qi Refining grants 200 lifespans, Foundation Establishment 500, Purple Mansion 2000, and Golden Core directly becomes ten thousand years. There's also a Dao Embryo realm. 🍉

This novel has a tight plot, with one climax after another and clever foreshadowing, making it hard to put down. The characters are well-developed, the main character's growth is clear, and the supporting characters are also distinctive and memorable. The writing is delicate and fluent, and the atmosphere is well-created, making it highly immersive and relatable.

A rare gem among Tomato's books The content is clear and easy to understand. Perhaps because I've read too many common cultivation novels with predictable tropes, I lost interest in reading further after the opening. This book features delicate descriptions, a novel plot, a clear structure, and meticulous logic. The characters in the book are well-developed and have distinct personalities. The opening is full of classical charm; I wish the author continued success!

I'm the author, please give it a perfect score, sob sob. If you don't like it, just skip it.

The writing is good, but what I want to read is about clan-protecting spirit beasts. I've read some, but they don't seem to have much to do with spirit beasts.

Overall, it's well-written. The only flaw is the dragon bloodline part; it remains to be seen how the author will resolve it. After all, things are valued for their rarity. To be honest, even at the sect level, it would be difficult for the Fifth Brother to protect Lu Xuan, given his extremely pure bloodline. The fact that his Dao Foundation could severely injure his Purple Mansion shows that he is more valuable than ten Fifth Brothers combined.

It's well-written, but the fight scenes go by too quickly, like flowing water, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to read. Also, the protagonist's cheat abilities could be explained more clearly; they're a bit vague. Reading Riddler is mentally taxing these days, and when I'm relaxing, I prefer a more comfortable reading experience. It's worth adding to my bookshelf.

Very good. Hopefully, the fifth brother won't end up like Xuanjian and Li Chijing, being refined into an elixir. Surprisingly, the fifth brother wasn't trained, but the second brother and the others were refined into pills.

With a clear structure, no flaws, and maintaining this writing style consistently, this is a fine work.