Superpowers: I Get Mahoraga’s Dharma Ring from the Start

The characters in "666 Yin Cry" have abilities that are more and more bizarre than the last. The protagonist is Jujutsu Kaisen's Ten Shadows Technique Helicopter Makoro, and there's also Diavolo from JoJo's Bizarre Adventure. I upgraded the Shadow Emperor on my own, and there's also the immortal master swordsman Chen Shisan with Conqueror's Haki, the famous scene of Warhammer facing fear, and the Causality Spear that can really sew things up!

The author didn't weave in enough elements; they could have added One-Punch Man, mecha, magical girls, and some supernatural villains. Then I could really enjoy watching the battles! 😄 By the time they reached the twenty-seventh city, their intelligence had completely vanished. Their analysis was a mess, and even after the death of an eighth-tier city lord, they still told everyone else to go back and rest. What were they thinking? Everyone's intelligence seemed to have plummeted. (Chapter 89)

So far, it's quite good. It almost fulfills all my imaginations about abilities: Gojo Satoru's limitless Rinnegan's attraction and repulsion, Makura's adaptability, and Sukuna's slashing attacks.

My suggestion is to let the main character manually adapt all the time, when not fighting, to manually adapt to everything they can, such as mana bars and cultivation breakthroughs. The score was too high. Four stars is too high; towards the end, I had no idea what the author was trying to write.

There weren't any uncomfortable scenes; the later parts were all about skill-based battles, which was great, but it was too new. The little girl in the latest chapter is a major flaw because you didn't do a good job of developing the conflicts in detail. Perhaps you had other ideas you didn't express. She was born burdened with sin, and now she's hiding the truth.

It's pretty good. I've read over 20 chapters so far and haven't found any bad points, which shows the author took it seriously. The premise is also very interesting; although it's a hodgepodge, the elements blend together very smoothly. [Please update more frequently!]

Keep up the good work, author! I think you're among the top martial arts authors on Tomato (a Chinese web novel platform). If you don't think you're that good, then I can only say that characters like Mo Xu Luo are truly rare. Characters like Mo Xu Luo who adapt well are very few, and generally, their quality isn't high. They all died out later on, and everyone's intelligence was reduced. 🙂

So far, there aren't any major flaws. Although the pacing is a bit slow, it's manageable. However, I feel the protagonist isn't fully utilizing his abilities efficiently, which could be due to slow leveling up or the overwhelming strength of the enemies. Speaking of which, unlike typical novels where enemies gradually increase in power, this one jumps a bit too quickly.

There are a lot of miscellaneous elements, but they're blended together very well. There are also some memorable scenes that are definitely worth watching, like Titus (the fearless illusion) 😏 Those who know, know.

I can only give it 3.5 points, no more. Even seasoned readers might find it hard to continue. In summary: the premise is quite good, but some details are poorly handled. The plot and power progression have some flaws, but it's still watchable if you don't think too much. The character development is acceptable. Ultimately, the main strengths lie in the plot progression and the world-building.