After the Neighboring Angel Feeds Him, the Depressed Author Is Forced...

So cool! ! Different from the traditional Asasi male protagonist, the male protagonist in this article has more sense of responsibility, belongs to the tsundere side, and is meticulous in life. He is like the tsundere version of Hong Song, who has a special sense of boundaries and is not a greasy male protagonist.

The rhythm is very smooth and very sweet. I would like to call it the strongest

I can very intuitively feel that if the emotional line of a novel can be written well, vividly, delicately and brilliantly, it will be a bonus, it will clear the spirit and refresh the soul. It is so outstanding [like]. This is the strength of female channels (female authors rarely watch it, so I am not sure whether they are all that good in writing). Hey, it would be great if male videos with themes such as the end of the world and martial arts could add an emotional line and be of this level. In this way, once the most lacking areas are completed, it will be a perfect online novel. It can only be said that it is rare to find. The only small problem is that the subsequent plots are slightly repetitive, but after all, it is written in the chronological order of spring, summer, autumn and winter, and the imagery and plot conception are relatively typical, so it is inevitable that the plots of the previous and later chapters will overlap after the New Year period. However, I still look forward to more innovations in the follow-up, come on!

The author writes very well. Although the vocabulary is relatively lacking, the emotions are relatively full. However, it feels like each chapter is a separate story with poor coherence (maybe this is the author's writing style). I can't accept it, but I still highly recommend it. 9.1 Stars. I'm back again. I really can't stand those rocks. [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry]

Warning from the front row, the review will contain spoilers, please mark them off if you mind. Let me talk about the review first. Overall, it is a good novel. Here are a few questions after reading more than 110 chapters: 1. It feels like the author updated this novel in an independent "unit drama" way, and sometimes the plot of the unit drama is not completely finished before it is connected to the next episode, and there is some repetitive content in the later period. 2. At present, I feel that the biggest problem is the confusion of time between the male and female protagonists. As a reader who has read chapter by chapter, it seems to me that the male and female protagonists have experienced at least a whole year of getting along with each other. However, in the subsequent chapters, it feels that the male and female protagonists have only gotten along with each other for one holiday, and there is no intersection before the holiday. 3. The author's "extreme". I may prefer this word. In the middle period, I can see a lot of extremes, which slightly affects the reading experience. Finally, the plot about holding hands is a bit anti-physical. Although the novel does not require thinking, it is sensitive to spatial models and can think subconsciously.

This is actually a handicraft and food article wrapped in a love story (forcibly true), with a slow pace, and the daily life of the male and female protagonists is smooth and sweet like running water. It is worth mentioning that compared to other love stories, here it presents more of the whole process of love, from love to love. The old-couple-style relationship is particularly comfortable and detailed, which is different from other love stories that tend to focus on the "love" encounter and familiarity.

I've finished reading it. It's the first time Mahiru Shiina, the heroine, has read it word-for-word in a fan novel. The other novels are all in the "harem". I don't know how to describe this feeling. This novel is really great. The sugar content is excessive, the collision between food and daily life, and the serious character of the male protagonist. It's hard not to make people feel that running in both directions is the most beautiful thing in the world. It's very well written. I won't say much. After reading it, you will know why I said this. Come on, author!

The sweetest novel I have ever read The male protagonist is domineering and venomous, while the female protagonist is cute and angelic. The reason may be because I just finished reading the original version recently. I didn't feel particularly good about it.

I haven't finished reading it yet, but it's so well written that I couldn't help but give it a good review first. My evaluation is that the two of them spoke the most rational words and had the most emotional relationship.

Why do I feel like I'm reading a food novel [laughs], but the interaction between the male and female protagonists is also very sweet [laughs]