Starting as Homer Simpson, but My Art Style Is All Wrong

Isn't Superman from a metropolis? What's he doing in Gotham?

Dude, do you have an outline?

So much filler. It's all so rambling and confusing. It's just a jumble of random dialogue. Uh, anyway, filler. Completely filler. They even used a topic that won several prizes to fill two chapters with dialogue. And the dialogue jumps around so much it's completely disorienting.

It's not bad. There's only one annoying problem: the dialogue with that duck uncle is too drawn out. A simple matter that could be resolved in two or three sentences is always dragged out and takes one or two chapters to finish. It's okay if it's drawn out occasionally, but it's hard to tolerate that every dialogue is so drawn out.

It was very interesting and very enjoyable 👍 It made me completely immersed in reading it 👍

It's a short essay, and the protagonist's name is too distracting.

Summoning, daily money-making routine—that's not what I want to see.

I've read 30 chapters and still don't know what it's about.

It's good, I love watching it.

The constant pressure from hydrological measures to suppress combat power is also rather uninteresting.