Dragon Raja: My Promised Little Sister Turned Out to Be the Dragon King

It's a very interesting Dragon Clan fanfic. In fact, the pace of the book is very slow. I didn't get into it at first. I was still confused. Later on, I found that the writing style is thinner and more everyday. (I don't recommend reading it if you want to read mindless and refreshing novels but don't like the daily style.) Although I have only seen the ending of Yoyo My Heart, but from now on, the two original characters are actually very interesting. I'm thinking, one Zhou Ziqing and the other Shen Ruojin, which just correspond to the chapter titles. I don't know if there is a Dao Zi Dao couple in the back. I haven't seen it yet. Zhou Ziqing's image is a bit fuller than Shen Ruojin's. He is a young man deeply influenced by martial arts novels. However, the description of the battle scene is suspected to have been learned by the author from Gu Long. No matter what the description of the battle is, the sword or the sword is fast. , The head fell to the ground before you could see it clearly. You should hone your writing skills during the battle scenes, but there is still a protection period for novices publishing books. As for the daily life, the visuals and the sense of time are well described. Personally, the slow pace is acceptable. Some original characters and graphic descriptions of some details from the student days are okay. I don't think it's necessary to rush into the main plot, because the author must have his own ideas and outlines. However, at the same time, I personally feel that if the author is not in a hurry to get into the main plot, he can actually have more interactive emotional lines with Xia Mi in daily life. Otherwise, readers may not have the patience, because I feel that the author starts from an earlier timeline just to create more bonds and backgrounds with the protagonist and Xia Mi. Generally speaking, it is one of the few dragon fanfics that does not follow the plot so basically. It can be seen that the author has his own things and ideas. I actually read this fanfic slowly to get into it, so I didn't read so many chapters and then commented. I am still looking forward to the later part. At present, the status of the protagonist is relatively high, so I am not too worried about the combat power. I look forward to the author's private design. I personally hope that the author can try to make up for some regrets. And I personally like the stupid dragon (Fenrir) very much. I hope the author can also play more roles for Xiaobao. The original work Xia The wires were connected to let Fenrir watch TV, which led to the stupid dragon's Nibelung being discovered. I also hope that the author can fill in this pit. I will take the time to read it slowly, and catch up while I am doing it because the updates are slow and few, and I don't know if the author has any stock. I am not very stable in reading updates. I am sending this because of the new author. I would like to encourage the new book and hope that the author can continue to write it vigorously. I do not say that there will be more updates, but I hope that at least one update can be maintained every day. Many of the private writing styles are very interesting and graphic. I look forward to the follow-up dragons and Xia Mi written by the author. I also hope that the author will keep someone (dragon) in his sword, come on! (No pressure for scores for debut novels, five stars for encouragement) @ Tang Chaoyu

I think it's pretty good. It doesn't matter whether it's about knives or giving out sweets, as long as it's logical. I hope I can stick to it and I really want to see the ending. Writing a fanfic doesn't necessarily have to involve Long Aotian and Harem Chun Shuang, they all have their own points of view.

I can see obvious progress in sentence segmentation and arrangement. The details are also very attentive. The writing skills are quite good. It really feels like a novel rather than a series of online articles. The original plot is also very good, but I can see the characters in Shui Ge's novel.

The plot is good, but after 19 or 20 rounds of knives, I declare that the author, Lao Feng Zifei, is dead.

The writing is good, but it's a bit boring to watch and the plot is bland. Maybe it's because it hasn't entered the main plot yet! Come on, author [Like] Update soon

It seems very good so far. It has the flavor of Jiangnan. The plot between Zhou Ziqing and Shen Ruojin left a very deep impression on me.

It's quite interesting, but it's a pity that I discovered it too early and didn't write much about it. . .

At present, most of them are original, of good quality and beautiful.

Come on author, why haven't you updated for several days [I'm about to cry]

At the beginning, I saw Yi Degrami was a little nervous, but after watching it, I found that the writing is indeed good, the plot rhythm is very comfortable, and the character creation is also good, but the update speed is slow.