[Nurturing] [Redemption] [Ensemble Cast] [Slow Burn] [Chinese-Style Magic Academy] [Villainous Mentor]
Question: How do you raise a proper savior?
This was Professor Sierke’s answer. As the head of the United Magic Academy and a legendary potions professor, he said:
1. Take meticulous care of her, and tailor her education to her talents.
2. Help her develop sound values so she can appreciate the beauty and goodness of the world.
3. Then go alone to battle the World’s Origin, make a mistake, and get pulverized by the power left behind by the Abyss.
Repeat the above, and you’ll get a proper little lunatic who wants nothing but to save the world and cling to you.
What? You want to know why you ended up raising a lunatic instead of a sweet, obedient daughter?
Well, honestly, I don’t know the answer to that either.
Anyway, the only advice I can offer is this:
“Run, you fools!”
It's so slow! I've read over 100,000 words and the female lead hasn't even gone to school yet. Judging from the synopsis, the main plot should be the romance between the male and female leads, but these 100,000 words are basically all useful but not very significant subplots, mostly about the male lead. This definitely elevates his character, but what about the female lead?
It's good in all aspects. The tag mentions an ensemble cast, and each character is well-developed. If you're looking for a story about filial piety turning sour or a romance between the main characters, you might be a little disappointed, as the main plot isn't very clear (if the main plot is the female lead's growth).
It's alright, quite good. Although I initially clicked on it out of filial piety, it turned into a slow burn (but it's still pretty good and quite interesting).
I think if all else fails, you should add some side stories; this is just too slow-burning.
It's starting to look better now, finally not as tiring to look at as before (●—●). The savior hasn't changed much yet, but she's much better than before. Her sister seems pretty good, and she seems to get along well with the protagonist (it would be great if she were the one in the "what if" storyline).
It's supposed to be a slow burn, but it's ridiculously slow. Maybe some extra chapters?
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It's quite beautiful, but it's emotionally draining.
I really enjoy slow-burn books, but a slow-burn style combined with slow updates is a disaster.
The emotional arc is excellent, the plot is interesting, and the writing is smooth. 🍉