Hogwarts: I Can No Longer Hide My Taoist Arts

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘Yes God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so cute that I cry From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 It sounds so good 🥰 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I was heard and the tears will not stop. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water.

Not bad. Many things in the plot are novel, but the characterization is rather stereotyped. When it comes to my mother from beginning to end, I can only remember her cooking, cooking, cooking. The descriptions in some places feel repetitive. For example: This time XX is more XX than before, and it can appear multiple times in one article. Overall, it's easy to see

Cute, Xuan Bao and Xiao Long are very cute, and the light daily life is also very beautiful, Draco

After reading so many Harry Potter fan stories about Chinese cultivation of immortality, I felt that the protagonist was not written very well. The protagonist has some insights into his own cultivation of immortality. It is not simply a combination of Chinese and Western, but a specific point-by-point penetration of the similarities and differences between the Western magic system and the Chinese immortality system in the text, as well as where they can be connected. This is beyond my expectation. (There are still relatively few chapters, I hope this can be expanded upon) The author's writing style is very good, and the pace is not slow. It is a relatively smooth daily life, and it just follows the original plot. There are no major changes to the characters in the original text (not Malfoy, in my opinion). It's really easy to get bored by giving so much plot to Malfoy, but the author didn't say [face covering]. Overall, I'm looking forward to it. It's a long way to catch up.

It's tied, the writing is very calm, the plot has no bugs, it revolves around how the protagonist, a Taoist priest from the East, learns and integrates in the magic academy, opening up a new path. The protagonist's ability in the article is not awkward but coincident. The three protagonists are friends with each other. The two male CP should be Draco. I feel that it should be the main focus of the article. The CP is also very good and the two get along very cutely. Now I am in the third grade and I am looking forward to the follow-up development.

Not bad, but there are too few updates. At the end of it, it feels like a two-male protagonist [licking the screen][licking the screen][licking the screen]

Good-looking🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It is the alarm clock for vegetative people😭Damn it, tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘Yes God is my rose. It illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful. 😊I run, I jump. I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor. 😮It makes me realize that God does exist. I feel so good that I cry. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock of vegetative people 😨 I can see the tears flowing from the corners of my mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 It sounds so good 🥰 God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I was so good that my tears did not stop. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water 😃

It's particularly beautiful, and the pull between Zhou Xuan and Draco is particularly exciting. Because the two are still young, a little progress between them can make people scream, it's completely pure love. All I can say is that it's simply not enough.

The writing is calm and eloquent. The writing style is good and the article is logically logical. It feels like I have read a new HP. The protagonist's character is very mature, and he talks like a big brother. He feels that his mental age is much more mature than his peers. It's like he is teasing a child. The protagonist is a very powerful scholar. He is a master of Chinese and Western knowledge at a young age. He is the best at learning everything. He is able to learn by analogy and has a deep understanding. He is born to do this, hahaha. He is so strong that his classmates don't dare to bully him and can only admire him. Then the highlight for both men is probably to be with my roommate Lao Ma [you can taste it carefully]. This is a cool article. The protagonist has always been the best. He has been admired by professors all the way. He is a future star in the magical world [Thinking]

It's good-looking, with two male protagonists, but I think I really need to research the fertility potion. I may not respond to other stories, but this one seems to be different. The protagonist and Malfoy are both only children. If they really want to be together, the family will be ruined, unless the parents work hard to create it, but it feels unlikely.