Immortal Cultivation and Longevity: Starting with Collecting Junk

So far, the writing is indeed excellent, the world-building is grand, and it's very interesting to read. Jiang Ling is probably one of the female leads, harboring deep secrets. Song's secrets are also significant, and it's unclear whether she's a female lead. Zhang Mo's character is believable.

It's reached 700,000 words, time to savor it. The author probably typed it by hand, so there's no strange smell. The cheat codes don't seem to be used too much so far, which suits my taste. The writing style in the first 30 chapters is quite good, and I've discovered quite a few clever touches from the author as I read through them.

When I got to chapter 172, I suddenly smiled. I initially thought it was just to kill time, but then in chapter 172, I suddenly felt something I hadn't experienced in other novels: it was like the story didn't need much foreshadowing, but as it unfolded, it felt natural yet also like a sudden epiphany, giving me a sense of the world's depth.

The logic is sound, and although some parts are a bit verbose, it's still acceptable. Actually, the author didn't need to explain so much; if you read with your brain, you can understand it. Overall, it's quite good. It's a story about ordinary people and five spiritual roots, and it seems to focus on depicting the bottlenecks in cultivation.

The writing is actually quite good! Why are there so few comments, and even two negative reviews? The protagonist's intelligence is fine, and the plot isn't bad either. I just wish there was more emphasis on cultivation. Why is he always thinking about developing skills? He should break through to the mid-stage first! At least collect everything slowly, what's the rush?

Taiyue Mountain, the Mysterious Immortal—it feels like this book has a lot to cover. Zhang Mo's time travel is questionable, Xiao Lan's appearance is likely foreshadowing, and there are other modern foreshadowing elements. I guess it will integrate with modern technology later on; will there be any scenes of someone single-handedly creating mischievous creatures? Looking forward to it!

Each chapter is packed with information, one link leading to another, and the author is telling a very interesting story and setting. The world-building is novel, the cheat-like abilities and character designs are good, and even the villains are decent and intelligent.

This is the real way to turn waste into treasure, to transform trash into precious gems. It takes time, and that's how it should be! It can't be like those games where you just put in some pills and level up instantly; those overpowered cheat codes are just unreasonable.

It's really great. Many details in this book are very moving, and it's the kind of writing I like.

A very realistic cultivation world, the author depicts it very well, every character is intelligent, and their actions and words are all appropriate from their own perspectives. Looking at the foreshadowing, will we return to the modern world later? White people have even appeared, a completely new setting! Author, keep up the good work, I look forward to the sequel and more updates. The story setting is quite novel, and I can't guess what will happen next; the author's thinking is a bit jumpy.