Battle, Begin, Magical Girl

You are right, but this is Sakura Aya🤔🤔🤔Magic radar invisibility🤓, pure physical damage😋, heavy [guillotine]☝, light double sword style👇, Ultra-limited gravity slingshot👉, mysterious magic shotgun👈, mastering the power of Sir Ox😏, and soul-based heaven-defying moves💪💪💪absolutely super awesome🤫🤫😱

I enjoyed watching the battle to guard my mother. It was wonderful to fight to the last moment (without killing myself), especially when I saw everything familiar around me become unfamiliar, it seemed to open up a new world. The author must continue to write, I still want to read it

It's good to watch. It mainly focuses on a battle which is fun. I feel like the author is not quite sure about the plot. I hope the author's writing will get better and better. I won't comment on the emotions. I think it's okay, but I can't compare with those big guys. But the battle is really fun. The whole battle is fun. The emotional aspect is less. Fighting is fun. Fighting is fun. Fighting is fun.

Nice! From the beginning, the male protagonist has a pure player mentality, controlling the female protagonist to kill monsters with great skill, and the monsters are very visual, and he is very handsome!!! Very, very cool! It's so exciting to watch, and the two of them will have more bonds later on, and it feels like a man and a sword become one! And it gives the heroine in the game a very pretentious feeling! The heroine has gone from being a pink and weak magical girl in the early stage, to a berserker, a melee master, and then to the latest upgrade, with the execution effect of chainsaws and huge scissors, new clothes, a black gothic dress, a half-veil, and a cool temperament. Don't be too pretentious! Don't be too handsome! So cool! And what makes people very comfortable is that the male protagonist gradually regards the female protagonist as his daughter. Not only is the game data very warm, but the arrangement of the game screen is also very good. It does not involve too much the real life of the male protagonist. It is more about the male protagonist controlling the female protagonist in the game, growing up and becoming stronger step by step. Moreover, the feeling of pretending to be a saint in front of others is really good and refreshing.

I finished reading it in the middle of the night. I hope that the protagonist will treat the heroine better in the future. Maybe the heroine is just a game character to the protagonist now. Some game methods that are normal in the eyes of the protagonist, even skipping classes, are indeed a bit scary in reality, but I can understand it. The above, that's all for now.

The subject matter is good, because the protagonist treats the heroine's world as a game, so the behavior is a bit CS in the eyes of people in the heroine's world, but actually it's okay, it has started to be a little gentler, and most likely uses some AI, but it's okay, there are no other AI novels that always have a lot of descriptions, and some of the plots are weird, but it's barely readable. Summary: Good food and grass, although not particularly good, is still good as long as you can accept the protagonist's early operations.

The imagination is very interesting, and the image of Xiao Ling is also very cute. I really like this contrasting theme. The protagonist and Xiao Aya feel like a father and daughter. However, I feel that the plot is too tight, the battles come one after another, and the characters are a bit too facial-looking. I haven't found any interesting supporting characters so far (›´ω`‹ ) A bit of personal advice, I understand that the protagonist is a hardcore gamer, but maybe a little description of the human side can make the image more three-dimensional? Could the author spare some time to intersperse some warmer daily descriptions? I want to see the interaction between father and daughter 😊 The intimate protagonist said that it would be better to take Xiao Ling to eat. I have been looking forward to seeing Xiao Ling temporarily put aside the pressure of fighting to eat delicious food "with her father", but it is a pity that there is no www Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next plot, and the author will give you my best [sends my heart][sends my heart][sends my heart]

The details are a bit rough, the ideas are novel, and the overall work is excellent. There is suspicion of AI writing, so read with caution

The writing style of this book is relatively smooth, and the action scenes are very exciting and rhythmic. The emotional drama of the characters is also good, but there is not much interaction. But the author, didn't he talk about magical girls? Why are Kaguya and Tsukijo useless in the White Tower? The gravity magic that the protagonist also uses is added to it at least. The previous interaction between the three magical girls, red, yellow and blue, felt a bit lacking. I hope the author can allow the male and female protagonists to communicate more in the future, and meet again by the way.

A book with considerable potential. There are two main things that are outstanding: The first one: Using the Souls game as a template, a relatively complete combat system is designed for the heroine, and the description of the battle scenes is quite excellent, which is quite rare. Article 2: The interaction between the female protagonist in the game and the male protagonist off-screen is well written, such as this interaction. Compared with other control articles, there is basically no interaction. I personally think it is better to have interaction. This is an important selling point of this type of article.