The System Is a Coward, but Overpowered

Let me talk about the conclusion first: you can take a look at it, the writing is smooth, the plot advances quickly, and the writing is refreshing without being boring. Then let me talk about the problem. The plot is a bit jumpy. At first I thought it was a romance show, in the middle I thought it was UFC, and then it jumped to super creatures? The protagonist is very strong, already stronger than Superman in the middle and later stages, and he also has the ability to become stronger in the sun, with no upper limit. It's just that the protagonist pretends to be innocent in the beginning, and then later turns into a little scumbag who doesn't take the initiative, refuses, or is responsible. The change is a bit fast, but with the powerful ability to not eat beef, just having a few more girlfriends is already the kindest thing, right? [Cover face] Finally, the protagonist's daughter is actually reborn, so she doesn't have the warmth of a dad story. The author's writing skills need to be strengthened [laughs]

The writing is very good, the writing style is smooth, the plot connections are appropriate, there are no blunt parts, and the climax plot is also well grasped, there is no deliberate delay, the word count is low, you can read it all or continue to maintain the next level.

The writing is good, the macho man should be paired with more female protagonists.

It's not bad, you can read it in the book shortage, but it's too little updated. Also, the author did not persuade Liu Ruyan to quit half of the time. Many people quit when they saw the name Liu Ruyan. I originally planned to quit. It was really a book shortage and I saw in the comments that it was worth reading. At present, I can read the new chapter 180, so keep going! I hope the author can make the protagonist a legend in the sports world. Winning a championship in all sports events, then making money to become the richest man in the world, and then retreating behind the scenes to control Yingjiang. It's just a suggestion. It depends on how you write it, the author. I hope you don't end it before it reaches 1 million words.

I prefer this kind of novel about my own way. It is more interesting to add entertainment and fighting.

He was so angry that he leaned against the railing, and the misty rain stopped. Looking up, looking up to the sky and roaring, with strong feelings. Thirty years of fame and dust, eight thousand miles of clouds and moon. Don't wait any longer. The young man's head will turn gray, and he will be filled with sorrow. The shame of Jingkang is still not over. When will the hatred of the ministers be destroyed? Driving a long chariot, traversing the gap in the Helan Mountains, ambitious to eat the meat of Huns, laughing and talking about drinking the blood of Huns,

Well written, keep up the good work [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's good to read. It's a good time for reading during the book shortage period. I haven't found any urine spots so far.

It looks good so far, I don't want to be a eunuch anymore

I kept skipping to read it, but I'm afraid I didn't actually read more than 30 chapters. They were all based on the rewards given by the system and personal attributes. I think it belongs to the invincible category. If you are interested, you can take a look [Thinking]