Doomsday Survival: Digging a Stone House with My Bare Hands from the Start

It looks good. The editor settings have brought new ideas to the old settings, and the management and construction are in order. There are currently no particularly big poisonous points. The problem of lavish trading is okay, because it is not that the heroine is subjectively stupid and generous, but the author is not good at converting supply and demand values ​​when writing transactions, and the transaction description is not the focus. It focuses more on the heroine using her talents to survive and build a safe house, so it is acceptable for the time being, but I hope it can be improved in the future.

The plot is more everyday but there are many interesting little details. It is a very special article about stocking up (I only like the part about stocking up when I read about stocking up [shy]). It is worth mentioning that the background setting is very concise and not verbose. Both the novice dungeon and the first dungeon heroine prefer the single-player mode. One person scavenges and builds, plants and stores goods, and the others are all tool workers. Goldfinger is very fun, and the non-upgradability of the opening chapter seems to cut off a point that can be written, but in fact it prolongs the novelty of the novel for readers and the longevity of the writing. However, the description of the safe house actually has a second floor, which is a bit dramatic. The experience suddenly changes from building matchboxes and surviving in poverty in the wilderness to a petty bourgeoisie white-collar worker decorating a loft apartment [laughs]

It's quite interesting. You stock up on goods to survive and build your own marble bunkers. I haven't entered a world like extreme natural disasters yet. I'm looking forward to the various worlds in the future. In fact, I still want the heroine to have some special bloodline, some offensive talents, or a special career choice. Otherwise, how can she survive in a special world? Also, I feel that the heroine's talents are used a bit too hastily, or her brain circuit is not exciting enough. I hope that in the future, I will have talents that can fix more bugs. Suddenly I realized that the heroine didn't even have a data panel...

The survival part is well written, and the use of golden fingers is also very innovative. It's all dry stuff. It's best to revise the text and change a bunch of words like "then" that appear several times in a chapter. For example, add more tone to the description of thoughts and add more descriptions to the description of scenes to avoid being too bland. The writing is getting better and better~~~I love watching this kind of real lone wolf adventure to survive

The setting is unique and interesting, and the character of the heroine is also good, because from the beginning there was no setting that the heroine was particularly smart. This setting of ordinary people bursting with inspiration is actually very realistic and interesting. The most important thing is that this book is hand-printed without any artificial intelligence. Please support me!

It's definitely more than a 7. The author writes it as a reader who wants to read it after reading it. Every story is very interesting. When I saw the final result, I suddenly realized that it was finished. This is the most powerful thing. The author's large-scale storyline is very attractive and I am addicted to it without knowing it. I especially like the last copy of the ghost.

It's okay. Some of the details are not very logical and can be ignored. The main problem is that the heroine's hands are too loose. If you don't want to eliminate this problem, you can actually add some preconditions. For example, you want to be friends with this local snake to facilitate transactions with him later, so you give him more food.

The subject matter and writing style are both good, and the rich plot made my eyes shine. However, some of the setting logic needs to be adjusted accordingly. This kind of writing with super powers cannot be too serious. There are flaws but not many. After all, the protagonist needs to grow up. The overall setting and content are good.

The writing is quite good, and the heroine is very cautious. The only pity is that the heroine is not a woman in science and engineering, and she did not use the editor's ability to the maximum. However, the heroine has grown up, so it is a more enjoyable story. I just don't dare to read a story where the heroine is too miserable. I won't be able to stand it.

It's pretty good, but there are too few, tying 134 pictures. Why is the score so low? It should be at least 8 points or above. The female protagonist is a lone ranger. She builds her own safe house and stockpiles supplies little by little. It looks good and I love watching it [please update]