Soul Land II: The Moon Shines White Tonight

Little sister, the author, you are so awesome. You actually wrote such a masterpiece. After reading it, my feet were lifting off the ground and I was chosen by God. My heart was pounding. OK, I will give you a five-star review.

It's very delicious. I can't find the kind of meal replacement in Dou Er fan fiction. The genre is novel. Narcissus is the best, and the year is the best. In the beginning, I was actually a little concerned that Yan Qing's character was a bit flat. Later, I found that the author's writing is getting better and better. I just feel that time flies very fast. Yan Qing is not like other fan fiction. The protagonist treats the protagonist like a nanny. Yan Qing has always cared about his family, and he has always treated people sincerely and gently. Maybe I am a protagonist-controller, and I don't like Huo Yuhao and Wang Dong very much, but it is undeniable that the author did not deliberately discredit them. Dai Yueheng is simply a guiding young lover. Dai Huabin and Zhu Lu in the article are no longer the flat supporting characters in the original work. Their charm can be felt in this article. If I were not trying to squeeze the points, I would be afraid that the author's big book would be gone, so it would really not be just four stars, but five stars.

It looks good, but if it doesn't look good, I will eat it upside down💩, the writing is online, the plot is online, the characters are not OOC, Dai Yaoheng is a guiding lover, it really feels like a good match [love][love][love][love][love][love][love][][][ Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] Let's control the points.

This article has a novel angle, is very smooth, and is also very sweet. The relationship between Little Moon and Little White Tiger is so delicate and natural that it makes people smile like an aunt unconsciously. Overall, this article is good ✺◟(∗❛ัᴗ❛ั∗)◞✺I hope the author will work hard.

Very nice! (๑•ᴗ•๑)♡, A rare Dou 2 fanfic, Dai Yueheng x Yan Qing, were they brothers in the early stage? Dai Yueheng is very concerned about appearance. Their relationship comes naturally, is sweet, and is a growth story. Xiao Hongchen ended up taking the same path as the original work, what a pity! Huo Yuhao will not have a relationship with Chengzi Wang Qiuer, but his relationship with Wang Dong is very sweet, which is good!

It is considered top-notch among Douluo fanfics. It's just that there are too many knives and the different perspectives will make it very frustrating for those who like cool novels. The guiding lover has a growth element, and the supporting characters are not simply mentioned in one stroke, and there is no such thing as inducing war that worsens the personalities of the different characters in the original work. In fact, I originally wanted to give it four stars because some of the expressions were too blunt, or a bit offensive and artificial... But if it was a pure romance between a young couple, there would be no problem without discussing the plot and description. The narcissus is still delicious, but it took a long time to be in another place. The later emotional description made me cry, but it was very satisfying. Anyway, I really like the author's writing characteristics. [Praise]

In the previous description, both the setting and the plot are very smooth. Especially in the first two chapters, the speculations about the protagonist's setting are very novel and brilliant. In the middle part, whether it is team cooperation (making plans together) or interactions with other characters, both the supporting characters and the protagonist are well portrayed and the characters are very vivid. But after the game, the part where Huo Yuhao and the others started trouble felt very strange. Whether it was the psychological reaction process of the protagonist or the occurrence and results of the game itself, it was not very understandable (but in the chapter about the bet before the game, Dai Huabin's psychological description was really good). After reading some of the answers, I felt that this part was indeed connected with the subsequent growth, but it did more harm than good. The overall feeling is that Huo Yuhao and the others provoked trouble, and the protagonist felt that he was in a dilemma (guilty? (๑•̌.•̑๑)ˀ̣ˀ̣), And then they won normally in the middle, and then Dai Huabin wanted to kowtow, and the protagonist came out to stop him (regret? ), And then Huo Yuhao and the others generously forgave, gaining a reputation as a good person, and Dai Huabin and the others may really have the reputation of being incompetent (who relied on the support department in their team to turn the tide, and relied on family resources to become the champion).

The relationship between the protagonists is really good, and I'm very touched. This is the best Douluo fanfic I've ever read so far. It's not very different from the main plot, but it's really interesting.

I really can't find another Dou Er fanfic that suits my liking as well as it's not as cliche as other fanfics. I highly recommend it! I usually finish reading an unfinished novel and won't continue reading it until there is an update, but I've been waiting for this one, it's a really awesome one.

It's super, super good-looking. It's the first time I've seen this type of film. Qingqing is super cute. Dai Huabin's change is also very good. I like the description of family love written by the boss. It's very warm. Everyone is a good baby.