(New book complete, rating still climbing~)
[Cultivation + System + light ensemble cast + comedy]
A notorious, perverted, lazy bottom × a lofty, prickly, overachieving top
Tang Xianyu is exactly what his name suggests: a lazy fish who loves to lie flat, the archetypal fragile college student.
On a whim, he stepped in to do a good deed and single-handedly caught a notorious campus pervert. But his blood sugar crashed, he stood up too quickly, fell into a lake, and drowned.
In the blink of an eye, he was reborn in the cultivation world. If he completed the System's missions, he could return to the course his original life had been on.
Tang Xianyu: “Can this System make everyone fear me?”
System: “Of course.”
Tang Xianyu: “Can this System make me unbeatable?”
System: “You bet.”
Tang Xianyu: “Amazing! Is this the Infinite Ultimate Super-Dominating System, or the Supreme Invincible Overlord System?”
System: “It's the Pervert's Professional Ethics System, dear.”
Tang Xianyu: “?”
System: “As a qualified pervert, wherever you go, human dignity will vanish into thin air, and moral boundaries will be utterly erased. People will tremble when they hear your name. When you stop at nothing to win, you'll be unbeatable. All you have to give up is a tiny, insignificant part of yourself.”
Tang Xianyu: (on guard) “I'm a bottom, but I can't lose my dignity, can I?”
System: “...Aren't you the pervert? I meant your conscience!”
[Content notes]: Not a conventional wish-fulfillment story. Light ensemble cast, slow burn, happy ending
This work has a lot of hot memes on the Internet. I don't usually like to read online articles that are filled with hot memes. Most of the similar works just slap together the punchlines, the writing is empty and perfunctory, and the content is interesting but without any structure. It is a test of my writing skills. But this book is completely different. The overall logic is smooth and solid. The protagonist Xianyu looks very casual. He can leave the system after completing the first dungeon. He can deduce many plot details without the help of the system. His IQ is online and his ability to adapt to the situation is full. Various interesting jokes are naturally interspersed with the characters. The look and feel is lively and interesting. It is not a flow of writing that only focuses on throwing out jokes and ignoring character creation. At first, I thought this was just an old-fashioned novel with a funny twist: Thousands of people dislike the protagonist, who accumulates popularity along the way and gains favor from everyone. Although the story does have a somewhat relaxed tone, it far exceeded my expectations. The protagonist never relies solely on external forces to cheat all the way. He has his own plans and actions, and there is a feeling that effort and reward are proportional. This setting is particularly poignant. In group portraits, many supporting characters have quite a lot of roles. If you like group portraits, you can give it a try. After watching half of it, it is not difficult to find that it is not only the protagonist who is outstanding, but the supporting characters also have many highlight scenes. When the plot turns to a serious and heavy paragraph, the author will not forcefully insert meaningless jokes to destroy the atmosphere, and the sense of proportion of jokes is just right. This is a micro-group portrait work with a good sense of atmosphere. The portrayals of the protagonists and various NPCs are particularly three-dimensional, and the IQs of all the characters are online throughout. The plot is witty and recognizable, and the scenes that reveal the past lives of the characters are also very easy to cry. The main plot is also good, with a lot of twists and turns. To be honest, it's quite interesting. Of course, there are also small logical flaws in the work. For example, in the first copy, Yao Guang is cautiously guarded everywhere, but he only lets down his guard against salted fish. He is still a big colander. It can be said that his brain has been trained to GG through practice or he is too confident. The setting of only guarding against the big boss and not against the little Karami can barely make sense. In fact, I recoded this long comment several times (I used Miaomiao Technology props to modify it later, so it will have a bit of a human-computer feel), because it has not been approved after I sent it several times, alas. . As for the love line, there is relatively little writing about the love line, and it is considered love at first sight. The plot is more concentrated in the later stages, but the plot is pretty good to make up for this, so I can accept this book. As for the ending plot, the line of Xianyu becoming the leader, well, I feel it is actually a bit inexplicable. It is right that Xianyu has his own choice, but since he is obsessed with going back but can leave his senior brother behind, the senior brother is also doing the finishing work for whether he can go home. Everything happened in the back and the evil talent was broken. Everyone was busy and was stabbed in the back. The sacrifice flow was followed later. The ending always felt a bit hasty. In short, it was quite contradictory. I couldn't understand it and was a bit confused. Some of the pitfalls in the text have been more or less corrected in the extras. No deputy cp When I saw the author saying that this book was a hit, I felt that the quality of the book was not that bad, the light and dark lines were well connected, and the plot was quite attractive (in fact, I just came to my senses and got to chapter 190). I guess it's not good at pushing. Best wishes.
The opening chapter is very attractive, and the author is also very interesting. Everyone in the group portrait team has a complete and unique story line. The supporting characters also have vivid personalities, and the foreshadowing laid out will be well-written. In the later period, the author insisted on finishing the plot but had no energy to refine it. It is a pity, because after reading the entire book, you will find that there is a complete story frame and narrative. However, the push mechanism and ratings of Mysterious Tomatoes resulted in very few people reading it, and there were also very few comments and interactions. Moreover, the author also said that the book was a hit, which resulted in the later period not being as good as the early stage and making it difficult for teachers. It is really impossible to persist in generating electricity purely for love. I hope this book can be seen by more people.
He, I personally don't think it has a secondary CP. It's a bit tricky in the later stage but the finale is very comfortable. To be honest, the writing is quite good. There are some flaws, but the points are more interesting than the flaws. The setting of the protagonist is sometimes very awkward, but he is shameless and sometimes has a unique flavor. At first, I thought he was a cool guy, but later I found out that he is a sultry guy. It is really interesting. The plot is also very unique. It is not a special routine. At least it made me feel fresh. The interaction between the supporting characters and the shaping of the supporting characters are also very perfect, highlighting the protagonist but not marginalizing the supporting characters. If the data of this book were better, it should be 9.9 Or so. It is really not easy for the author to write a complete book when the data is very poor. I haven't written a book review for a long time and I don't know what to write. I hope the author will continue to work hard!
Very beautiful!! Baby Salted Fish is cute and cute. I want to know the ending of the main text. Did Salted Fish use that prop and then reversed the situation, so he returned to modern times? Then the extra story said that Zangjin went to modern times, so why didn't Little Salted Fish use this prop at that time? Actually, I didn't understand the ending, but overall it's really awesome! The teacher's writing is also very good, and the group portraits are the best!!
I thought it was lighthearted and funny, but I found it was not. Looking forward to further developments. 🤔
I just threw this book on the bookshelf. I didn't open it because the character design didn't suit my taste. But I was in a literary shortage, so I noticed this book. I just read two chapters and the author's writing style and plot captured my heart. It's very good, and the setting is really novel.
It's very interesting. I think the experiences of everyone in the theme group are well written. I cried when writing the memories of each of them. Whether I was moved or sad, this article portrays the protagonist. I think it is also very good. He is flesh and blood and has a three-dimensional view. I really recommend everyone who reads this book to keep reading [Blow kiss]
This is the first time I have reviewed a book on Tomato for a long time. In fact, the story logic and narrative line of the whole book as well as the characteristics of each character are quite good. However, I can see that the connection and emotional foreshadowing of individual parts are a bit empty later (for example, I can empathize with Wanfa Zong). The dungeon, but I still feel that the two senior sisters and the Tongbeishi Sacrifice dungeon are not good enough, but they are also very good. Unfortunately, the necessity of the appearance of fellow villagers → the necessity of the system to bring so many people to this world has not been obtained, and the extra story after rebirth has not been eaten). But I have to say that the idea is actually very novel. It is really precious to see an author who writes about "cause and effect" and "morality" so carefully in a software atmosphere where everyone is using templates to get pass rates, cool points, and dopamine~
Very nice! I really like the protagonist's character!! The plot is also very novel, especially the part about the undercover Acacia sect. I haven't read a novel in a long time and my aunt smiled. It was so cute. . . And it focuses on praising the author's female consciousness. He does not blindly set all the important characters except the protagonist as male. I am really happy to see many plump female characters, not just as tool people!! This is the first time I have read such a comfortable book about cultivating immortals! Come on, author!!
Super pretty! It's a pity that it's not very popular. More people will definitely watch it in the future. The salted fish is super cute.