I Own an Unfinished Building

I like this book very much... But not many people read it 😢 The plot logic is quite novel, but the author doesn't seem to be good at writing emotional dramas. Except for the emotional scene which is a bit stiff, everything else is very good! ❤️ I can find it in Tomato Writing books no longer follows the same routine!

Really pretty! According to the direction of the story, the ending is more or less a family knife, but in the end, the author ended it with a kind of warmth that we can't imagine. And the administrators and town hall people mentioned in it are very new characters. Lao Bai said that administrators and town hall guards are teammates who fight side by side. But at the same time, the administrator must exist, because he is the town hall person, the "anchor" in the human world. Most of the emotional lines in the whole text can be seen in Xiaoye's eyes or some actions, showing his love for Xiaolin. But in the extra chapter, Xiao Lin's initiative really surprised me... This book is really good. Some of the golden sentences in it show the author's profound writing style... (I don't know how to praise it anymore) OK! May they live a safe, happy and free life in another world!

It's good to read, I like it very much so far, but I would like to ask the author if this is the main story, is the protagonist Lin x Ye, Meow Meow Meow?

It's very beautiful. I think this one is very beautiful. The emotions are implicit and not so obvious. You have to taste it yourself. Then I think the horror part is well written, it's really scary, and some of the scenes where the protagonist is showing off are really cool. There are a lot of things to eat in Shuangjie. I like it very much and hope the author will make more horror ones.

Lin Yinshen accidentally inherited a strange unfinished building, but found himself involved in a world full of suspense and supernatural phenomena. The seemingly ordinary property department is actually the "Foreign Object Business Management Department". The weird attitude of the drama manager Ye Ze, the strange changes in the residents' traits, and the shocking truth hidden in the unfinished building, let us follow the protagonist to explore 🧐

Oops, at the end, I thought it was about a family knife, but it turned out to be a responsibility knife. I don't know how sorry I am. The pace of the whole text is good, and the writing style and plot are also very good, but it is too short and I feel like I could write a lot more. In addition, the emotional line is a bit vague, when did they get together [what], but for me who pays more attention to the plot line, it is already well written!

The author's writing style is really good. There are many things in it that I didn't expect. I hope the author can write more! 🍉

Overall, it looks good, the setting is relatively novel, and the storyline is quite interesting. It's just that the plot is not rich enough. I feel that this is a longer and longer story, so I still have some unfinished thoughts after reading it [Learned]

The setting is pretty good, as is the characterization. It's just that the plot is a bit bland and not that attractive. It would be better if the content were richer. There is almost no emotional line, just a little vague description

I really like it. The protagonist is so interesting and I love the subject matter. Hey, it would be nice if the interactions and emotional lines between Ye and Lin were more obvious. It's not cute enough at all. Also, it's a little short at over 90 chapters. [I'm full]