After the Beloved Little Sister of the Doormat Second Male Lead Awakens

So far, the look and feel is pretty good. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is sweet enough and the female protagonist is cute, but there is a slight contrast due to the system tasks. At present, there are only one or two minor flaws. One of the more serious ones is that the puppet of the god-like roommate Lin Jiajia secretly posts challenge posts for the protagonist. Although I know it is to promote the plot, it is still very cool. I can think of some other plot points here to replace Toneri's random posts. It's so awesome and the protagonist has no reaction at all. This is weird. The second is not a big problem, but it is still there. The setting is that the brother loves his sister very much and is a sister-in-law, and the family is extremely rich, but the heroine is a college student and only has 3,000 yuan a month for living expenses. Later, to a certain extent, she went to boxing because of 400,000 (although I know it is not the main factor). But the brother spent nearly a million to treat Green Tea Di Di, but the heroine gave me a feeling of being a little short of money. Finally, regarding the character of the brother, I think that if a person really cares about you, he should have a good communication with his sister in advance. In any case, he should not invite two big men to force his sister to "invite him home". This is like the kind of situation that only occurs when parents are extremely controlling. Personally, these are the biggest highlights in my opinion (it only represents my personal subjective opinion). Apart from these, the subject matter of this book is fresh, the author's writing style is average to above average, and some of the laughs in the article can be well integrated with the plot. I give it an overall rating of "Shangren". It can be read as a love story with a comedy in the face, but don't be too cerebral.

The plot written by the author is good, but the only flaw is the character creation, which feels like it is just to advance the plot. For example, the three roommates in Chi You's dormitory put the heroine on the plot and grilled her without asking if she wanted to. I hope you can make some corrections. I have worked hard here, so please take a rest.

Personally, I think it is the best-written one among similar genres. The author's writing is very delicate, and the content is also very interesting. It is not a cookie-cutter routine, and the system is not like other systems that only force the host. It actually protects the sister when she is in danger (this is really a big boast). The interaction with the male protagonist is particularly sweet, the emotional transition is natural, and it doesn't look funny at all. The brother's line of salvation is also written very realistically. This is what real siblings are like. They have quarrels and misunderstandings, but the brother will still secretly reflect on and care about his sister. Woohoo, I want to see my brother jump out of the plot and wake up quickly.

It's a very new setting (for me), and it's also very funny. Every time I laugh, I can make people laugh to death. Sister Bao is simply a fragrant, soft and glutinous little cake. Although the male protagonist is a "gangster", he listens to Sister Bao's words (he will definitely be a good husband in the future👍) The overall rhythm is also very good, and I also like the setting of Sister Bao very much (the contrast is cute) (who doesn't like the fragrant, soft and glutinous little cakes, but sometimes the words I say make people feel guilty <Reading novels at home, guilt comes from the sky) Come on [from the first chapter, 'I haven't skipped class, I haven't said any bad words, and I feel like I'm committing a crime even if I eat a spicy stick every now and then']). The male protagonist also likes him (he's so handsome), and he must be a male protagonist in a setting where Brother Mei Bao is a dog licker! I feel like I am a girl-controller (must be), and everything is good except for the setting of licking dogs (later I also relied on my sister to get rid of this setting) The original heroine's first impression of me was not very good. She treated Sister Bao's brother as a backup. She still felt bad for ignoring you. She still wanted to break Sister Bao's wings? It feels like the brain circuit of the original heroine is a bit... Unspeakable. I think the most disgusting part is when the original heroine said to Brother Meibao, "Isn't my brother's life comparable to your sister's nightclub?" Oh, what does your brother have to do with an outsider? Besides, Mei Bao has already been kidnapped by Huang Mao (no), can Mei Bao's brother Chi Yu not be anxious? [Personal opinion] [This is purely a personal opinion. Don't scold me if you don't accept refutation. I have a soft heart. I am the first to write a long review of a storytelling book. There will definitely be some bad things. Don't scold me. Don't scold me. [Say important things three times]

The tasks arranged by the system can always help the heroine. The male and female protagonists have the feeling of being a coward and a good girl × a handsome guy who is a real boss. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is also just right, not overly intimate, and it is refreshing and sweet. It feels like a funny and refreshing article. When my brother watched me while doing system tasks, my brother's reaction was particularly funny. The heroine competed with Lu Yan, and when the heroine almost fell into a disadvantage, the system came out to help the heroine, which was very cool. When the heroine decides to fight, the hero has been helping the heroine with special training, supporting the heroine's decision, and supporting the heroine.

It's super good-looking. The heroine's brother is the affectionate male lead. The heroine is bound to the system. As long as the heroine and her brother lick the dog, the heroine must complete the task. She also made friends with the yellow-haired male protagonist. In short, it is very good-looking.

It's very interesting. At first I thought the male protagonist was the kind of ruffian and handsome, but in the end he also brought a bit of humor to him. It's very interesting. My brother is really annoying sometimes. When will he be able to wake up a little? I feel sorry for the female protagonist.

It's good-looking, good-looking, and very sweet. There's basically nothing cruel about it. Generally speaking, this book has strong male characters but stronger female characters. The heroine has a system, and the system will issue golden fingers and the like. The main purpose of the male protagonist's existence is probably to piss off the heroine's brother. The male protagonist is a prince, so he is relatively rich, and he can also fight. In the early stage, he mainly helps the female protagonist develop her fighting skills before she fights with the original male protagonist. Later, he mainly plays tricks on the female protagonist and her brother, and is regarded as a tool to promote the female protagonist to obtain skills such as golden fingers. Then, although the heroine's company is not as good as that of the hero, she is very happy. Except for the fact that her brother was forced by the plot at the beginning to go out of the plot to provide warmth to the original heroine, ignoring the sister he brought up since childhood, but in the end he woke up from the original plot for her sister. The heroine's baby knows tea art herself, and her fighting skills are trained and developed step by step with the help of the hero. Not only that, the heroine also knows hacking, business, chess and other skills. The most important thing is that there is no female competition in this article, and the author also respects women. But there is a lot of repetitive content, that is, the same sentence is repeated twice, and some sentences do not seem particularly coherent, or there are inexplicably a few extra words in a sentence that I don't want to close. Because I read quickly, I basically just glance at it, which makes me a little annoyed. Then I am afraid that I will read it wrong, so I have to go through the previous content to see if I have read or remembered it wrong, or compare the sentences to see if they are exactly the same.

It was okay, it looked good at the beginning. In the middle and later stages, the male protagonist couldn't resist his family, so he became a gangster. In the part when he brought the female protagonist home, I only saw that the fiancée decided by the elders wanted to stay overnight, and the male protagonist couldn't refuse. The way the male protagonist chooses to rebel against his family is to become a gangster and then meet the female protagonist... I didn't read the rest of it, but the first part is okay, you can make your own decision

The male protagonist is so perfect, so perfect that it feels like a dummy. It feels weird and nothing else. Just watching them fall in love is fine, but it's very bland and nothing particularly exciting. In addition, the heroine's golden finger is very wide, and the system can cheat, which is very good. Our heroine's baby is so powerful!