A Proposal from the Start: The Little Girl Is an SSS-Rank Mystery

It's a prank, and very purposeful at that. The proposal to the little girl was a good starting point, and the second stage with a little wedding is nice too. They're even making progress, not bad, not bad. I'm leaving now, good luck to you guys!

I read the latest chapter in one go, it was so satisfying! Everyone's intelligence is on point, and everyone reacts reasonably based on their known information. 😆😆 I often have to lower my IQ when reading other novels because that's common, and I just have to accept it. Finally, I've seen some novels where the officials, the protagonist, and everyone else are all intelligent.

I saw that yellowish-brown button in one go 🙂 Overall, it's pretty good, and the characters' intelligence is quite good. However, the protagonist's mindset needs a change; they need to clearly recognize their own abilities. Also, the system tasks shouldn't be so demanding that you have to accept them all 🤦 There's no penalty for failure. They need to be able to prioritize.

It's a pretty good novel, but there's not much of a story about the little girl. I hope the author updates faster! 💕

It's alright, but there's not much screen time between the male lead and Zhi Meng. When will the author give us some sweet moments between the male lead and Zhi Meng?

Great! I love it! More updates please! If you want to electrocute me, just do it! I declare that Zhimeng is the true female lead!! Follow-up comment: This is clickbait! Zhi Meng has too little screen time. Give Zhi Meng a mature, sophisticated look!

Advantage: It's a very novel concept. I especially love the "childlike dream" in the title and want to see more of the main characters and their story. If more of the story focuses on the two of them, this kind of sweet romance is likely to get high ratings from readers. Shortcoming:

It's alright, but I would recommend that, firstly, you absolutely must not align yourself with the official organization; joining any organization is irrelevant, you must be free. Secondly, add some plot points related to the "Childhood Dream" storyline; most people are drawn to the book because of its title.

You should have mentioned the transformation earlier! Then you wrote a magical girl arc, and after the battle, you went back to normal. So, is there any more transformation later? I have to say, if there isn't, you've offended both the readers of the original story and those who don't. I'm already offended those who don't read shonen manga, because if they see the magical girl part, they'll definitely react like Akatsuki 😏

This is a work with a strong Japanese light novel style, combining a moderate amount of system elements, supernatural revival, and magical girl elements. Overall, it's a very interesting theme, and the romance is also well-written, with both strengths and weaknesses.