A Proposal from the Start: The Little Girl Is an SSS-Rank Mystery

It's a spoof, and it's very purposeful. It's no problem to propose to Lolita and lead to the topic. It's good to have a small day in the second stage, and it's making progress. It's not bad, I'm leaving first. Come on.

I read the latest chapter in one breath, and it was so comfortable to read. All the members' IQs were online, and everyone was able to react reasonably and in line with the information they already knew [laughing] [laughing] Tomato had to lower his wits from time to time when reading those novels. Because it is generally like this, I had no choice but to accept it. Finally, I saw some novels where the official, protagonists, and all the people have normal IQs. Childish Meng is super strong, but she only shows dependence on the protagonist. This is a very important and refreshing point in this novel [shy][shy] It spoofs various tasks issued by the system, and the stories often look very funny. The protagonist has more and more means due to the existence of the system. He defeated a monster with bare hands before his physical fitness was strengthened. Now that his body has been strengthened in all aspects and with various rewards that may appear in the future, he should soon have a strong position in the entire mysterious world.

I saw that shit-yellow button in one breath [smile] Overall, it's pretty good, and my IQ is relatively online. But the protagonist's mentality needs a change so that he can clearly recognize his own abilities. Then if the system task does not come, the task will have to be accepted [face covering] and there will be no penalty for failure. It is necessary to distinguish what is light and what is serious. There are no other problems. [Thinking] It's just that there are too few to watch. Every character that appears so far is great in terms of description. [Like] Let me reiterate that I am not a lolita fan! Well, no! No! Yes!

It's a very nice novel, but the plot of the little loli is a bit lacking. I hope the author can update it quickly [Sending my heart]

It's okay, but the plot with Zhimeng is a bit lacking. When will the author release the candies between the male protagonist and Zhimeng?

Nice! Love watching! More updates! If you want to call me, just call me! I declare that Zhimeng is the number one heroine! ! Follow-up comment: It's a headline-grabber, Zhi Meng's role is too small, please give Zhi Meng a royal sister form!

Advantages: It's a very novel setting. I particularly like the childish dream in the title. I want to see more stories about the protagonist and her. If they were told in a larger space, this kind of candy-sprinkling story would easily get high scores from readers. Disadvantages: It is obvious, as other comments have said, that the protagonist goes to help the country next door solve the problem of beasts for no apparent reason. Knowing the danger, he does not consider the country's invitation or the impact of his own accident on his parents. From a standpoint, most readers will be dissuaded. After arriving in the neighboring country, the magical girls depicted have to work hard and make sacrifices, etc., Which will make them shudder. From the perspective of a sweet novel, it's pretty good-looking, but the aspect of the story is a bit too affecting to the viewing experience. There are many ways to write about childish dreams and the protagonist, and it feels like a good hand is being played badly.

It's okay, but I recommend that first of all, you absolutely can't be with the official. It doesn't matter which organization you join or not, you have to be free. Second, add the plot of the childish dream. Most people come here because of the name of this book.

You said you would transform, then you wrote a magical girl chapter, and then you went back after finishing it. So will there be any transformation later? I have to say that if there is no transformation later, both the readers of Bianwen and those who do not read Bianwen will be offended. Those who don't read Bianwen are already offended, because those who don't read Bianwen will definitely feel like Chi Daoshi when they see Magical Girls [laughing]

It is quite a work with a Nikkei style, with moderate system elements ➕ supernatural recovery ➕ magical girl elements. Overall, it is a very interesting subject matter. The love part is also well written, with advantages and disadvantages. Then it is normal that the total score is not high and there are many low scores in the comment area. Everyone still has a lot of opinions on the story design of the protagonist going to the heroine's country to help fight monsters. I personally think the protagonist's motivation is reasonable and easy to understand. I meet a beautiful girl from two dimensions, and then I don't want something to happen to the person I like, so I go to help. From the perspective of motivation design, there is no problem. The story design of literary and artistic works does not need to be uploaded to other places, but it is normal for everyone to feel dissatisfied, and it is also the freedom of every reader to give scores. Then another point is about the Lolita part of the title of the book. The author has also given foreshadowing and design. There will definitely be a large plot in the future. There is no need to rush, the story will unfold slowly. I personally still like this work very much. Book friends who like Nikkei style can try it. Above↑