I Cultivate in the Demon Sect, While My Brother Is Called a Demon in the Immortal Sect

So far I only see Bailaizhang's appearance At present, the author's writing method is very special, different from other previous works of others. Smooth, extremely smooth, not sloppy, saves a lot of psychological description, and allows me to understand a person from his behavior. This castrates away the common reader's perspective of God, but I don't feel uncomfortable at all. However, there are also shortcomings. For example, sometimes when you look at it, you find that there are some things before and after that are not explained to the readers. For example, why did the jade baby in Jia Zi Cave disappear when the protagonist came out at the beginning, and became the photoelectricity in Dantian? This aspect needs to be improved, but it is still worthy of encouragement

It's quite good-looking, even, it makes people feel like they can't stop watching it. I like this technique similar to line drawing (it rarely talks about the psychological activities of the protagonist, usually after watching it for three breaths... Hahahaha). The beginning is full of dangers, and the later stages of dormancy and improvement, including some of the characters that appear, are quite distinctive. In the ghost ship at the end, the golden fingers (foreshadowing) are also very big... The brothers in the introduction probably meet in a secret realm.

The author's writing style is good, and the rhythm of the plot is also well grasped. The later period is not as depressing as the early period. It is mainly about the youthful spirit. The protagonist is kind but not a virgin, but I still think he is too kind. . I don't like this very much

This introduction is very attractive to me [laughing] I have already followed a third and almost half of it. So far it is okay. The writing style feels a bit bland. I have not seen it often. It is quite unique and can be read. Give me a five-star support

It's very interesting but there are too many things in the clouds. I hope the author can explain it at the end of the chapter.

So far, it looks pretty good, but I'm curious if there's a female protagonist

The subject matter is quite new, you can continue writing [Like][Like]

So-so, a lot of poison, but the subject matter is good

It's very beautiful. It's rare to be able to read a book patiently all the time. The descriptions in the book are also very good. It's worth reading.

Is there a female protagonist or no CP?