Delta Force: You Shot First

Yes, I finally found a Delta fan that is not a game live broadcast, or rather a game that comes to reality in the national destiny survival game. The only pity is that I prefer pure force and am not used to reading this kind of literature about being a drone pilot.

I have read Chapter 58 so far, and I don't dare to read on, because when I look at the table of contents, there are only forty chapters left. Please read it again, and let me talk about my current feelings. As an ordinary person with limited culture, my understanding of firearms is usually through non-military fans of games. The article is filled with a large number of firearm models, vehicle models, and some professional terminology knowledge. In my opinion, it is like a bible. I can't understand it, but I am shocked. I think the creation of the protagonist is very successful. The protagonist is not Long Aotian. The so-called cheats are not particularly brainless at present, but provide a little help at critical times. The protagonist is smart, emotional and very charming. The plot is very hard-core and real. After all, it is not a mindless novel, at least not for now. The character creation in the article made me feel that these characters are flesh and blood, not just tools to promote the plot. The part where Lina performed surgery on the members of the Black Fox Team touched me deeply. She is the best doctor. As for the poisonous point, when being surrounded and killed, the protagonist revealed his identity as a time traveler to Mai Xiaowen. Some people may think that is a poisonous point, but in my opinion, this plot made me feel that the protagonist is a living person. In the face of death, no one can always remain calm. He will also be afraid of death. As he said, it is not his war.

It's really good-looking, much better than Tomato's other deltas [cool], especially much better than the National Games and Parallel World live broadcasts [face covering]

Although this third-rate title and this stupid pig cover caused me to miss this book many times, it is still a good book, and Chinese people do not lie to Chinese people. It fits the background of the game plot (I am not a military fan, but the author Balabala has written a lot, and it looks very powerful). The author updates a lot very quickly, and the quality is also online. But what worries me is that this game has only been out for a year, and the plot and content planned by the game are conflicting and imperfect. In the later stages, the plot will most likely have to be edited or directly treated as a novella and ended as soon as possible. (There is nothing wrong with this. It is very important for a first novel to have a good reputation. For a reader, there is no need to forcefully write a complete work to continue its life.) My personal suggestion is that you can write the plot based on the operators, skins, and benchmark actions in the game. For example, After Lace completely takes over the dam, Hudson sells inferior Mandel bricks on the private estate and attempts to take over Space City. In this way, there are 10 pounds of rose red waves Landon Harrison and gti mole tidal prison operation black tide and cheerleader, The space base's Operation Brave will be connected with the plot of Dragon's new red skin. The Dam Breaker is tied into Saving Uluru (the previous story event). Finally, it ends with the battle between GTI and Huck after five or ten years in the game plot (it is a big battlefield, which fits the plot, and everything that needs to be written has been written) All in all, this is a good work, I'm looking forward to it

Some people say that Chapter 17 of Moral Kidnapping is not well written. But he explained this again in chapter 18. You can take a look at the back, the writing at the back is really good. There is quite a lot of professional knowledge. It can be seen that the author really paid attention to it.

It's okay, but it's a little tricky in the early stages. Maybe the author took it for granted when he was imagining it, resulting in a less immersive sense of plot. But it gets better later on, whether it's the logical self-consistency, the characterization of the characters, or the author's description of military knowledge, they all attracted me. Not to mention occasionally giving out benefits to satisfy readers' fantasies about game characters. In short, the writing is quite fulfilling. And with this update efficiency, I just pretended that I didn't see some of the little poisonous points in the early stage [laughing evilly] Come on, author!

I have read so many Delta fanfics, but this one is the one that suits me. The data is accurate, the descriptions are delicate, and the emotional lines are clear. Although there are multiple female protagonists, it does not give people the feeling of a stallion. Come on, please read more! ! [Sinister smile]

I personally think there is no problem with the rhythm control. It takes time to defeat monsters and upgrade. The content is serious, lively and lively. It is considered an excellent work in Delta fan fiction. It makes up for the problem of Veyron's physical injury. I won't comment on the emotional line because I haven't talked about it. The impression is acceptable and there are a lot of updates. Good luck to the author.

I hope that the author can let the male protagonist provide some theoretical and ideological guidance to Said in this book, so that Said's character can be sublimated. Whether he joins the Communist Party or the commune in the future, he can make Said, the son of Orion, transform from a local warlord who only vaguely protects Asara into a real fighter with clear goals and practical ideological and philosophical guidance. Regardless of whether Said can successfully eliminate outsiders and lead Asara to independence in the future, at least Lao Sai has worked hard and fought hard. [Sending Hearts]

Delta +1 star Not a brainless cool article +1 star +1 star for opening a harem and catering to repressed groups The strategy complies with the process of giving wood in every corner +1 star Because +1 star, so +1 star