Zhengyang Gate: Transmigrating as Han Chunming and Winning Over Guan Xiaoguan

Thumbs up to brother! The foundation of "Zhengyangmen: Crossing Han Chunming and Taking Guan Xiaoguan" that you recommended is very good, but the layout must be enlarged, the plot must be deepened, and the characters must be vivid! It's still a bit shallow now, so I hope the author won't just talk about love, but also include the richness of the old Beijing era, antique treasure appraisal, hard-core business wars, and family intrigues! The characters are flat: Han Chunming needs to have an online IQ and a deep enough city; Guan Xiaoguan needs to be independent and strong, not a love brain; Cheng Jianjun and the villains need to be bad enough, sinister enough, and difficult to deal with, so that they can be slapped in the face! Business war is a child's play: starting from collecting rags and selling bicycles, to restaurants, antique shops, real estate development, cross-border foreign trade, and even financial capital games, we will grow bigger and stronger step by step! There are many stories about snobbish relatives, pretentious nouveau riche, and powerful people who have high standards and look down on others. In the end, Han Chunming stepped on them with his strength. It is full of satisfaction and no mercy! You must follow the line of the rise of the Han family: write about family unity, internal fighting between families, network building, and generational inheritance, interweaving the courtyard neighbors, antique circle forces, shopping mall rivals, and official relationships all together! It must not be finished early! Write at least 1000-5000 chapters, and update daily and frequently in a long-term and stable manner. Don't be lazy, don't update intermittently, and don't be perfunctory! This book has the potential to be a masterpiece of the times + a family epic. It depends on whether the author dares to write in depth and length! If you dare to work hard and update perfunctorily again, all book friends will directly form a group to send you blades and urge you until you accept it! It must be updated until we are satisfied!

The plot is very compact and the characters are very distinct. I won't say more and will add more. It's nice to look at, and the characters are really well drawn.

The writing is very good. It is better than the other one with the system called "What is Chuan Zhengyangmen" and refuses to lick Su Meng at the beginning? Why is the rating lower than that one? The writing of this book fits the plot and is not brainless. The main line and branch lines are clear. Although there are some minor flaws, they are not concealed and the whole thing is full of positive energy [Like]

It's very interesting, and the whole book is very smooth. The problem is that the updates are too slow. To be honest, this one has a main plot, and the update speed will make many people give up. The update is too slow. Obviously the plot writing is good and the content is very smooth. The score is only 6., Why don't you write it faster?

[Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Good, good, good The characters and dialogue are very smooth. I've watched it and liked it. I won't praise you for too much. Come on~

Colorful, clear, beautiful, I love reading it, I hope the author will post more

The creation of the time-travel drama Under Zhengyangmen is very innovative and I love watching it.

He has clear thinking and strong logic, and depicts human nature clearly.

Finally found a book about Han Chunming and Xiaoguan [Like]

It's okay, but I can't figure out what to do with Su Meng.