The Sickly Cannon Fodder in the Sugar Daddy Novel Ran Away

It's delicious, delicious, and the characters are delicious. Just this cute little kitten and cute puppy. I will be defeated by cats and dogs in my life. The beauty of this book is not only the love line, the family line is also the most worth reading. Xiaoluo and her brother are both thinking about each other. The most poignant plot for me was when her mother died. Xiaoluo asked her brother if he would be like this in the future, "Brother will not let you do this." I was very moved when I saw it. The author really shaped the relationship between the two brothers very well. Even if the brother sacrifices everything, he must let Xiaoluo grow up safely, and Xiaoluo has always been thinking about his brother. He wants his brother to pursue his dream, and he also wants to be his brother's backing. The relationship between the young master and Xiaoluo has also transitioned very well. From the initial wariness and distrust to understanding each other and then falling in love, they have always been devoted to each other and trusted each other. The young lovers must always be together. Please support our author a lot! This is my first time writing such a long book review, please forgive me🥺 I can see such an appetizing book, teacher, you are my partner, my wife, my baby, my wife, my boss, my shopkeeper, my woman, my Ernie, my mother, my little fairy, my mentor, my idol, my sweetheart, my pillow. My sweetheart, my girlfriend, my dear, my wife, my lover, my wife, my ancestor, my baby, my condom, my wife, my wife, my wife, my virtuous wife, my other half, my true love, my sweetheart🥺🥺🥺❤️❤️❤️

It's pretty good to watch. I hope there isn't a secondary character behind it (actually, it's fine if there is one, I just hope it doesn't take too much of the main character's role) The two brothers are so cute, and as far as I'm concerned, there shouldn't be anything poisonous about them.

The overall structure is good, and it has the look and feel of "A Little Smile Is Alluring". The writing style is also quite fluent. It is different from the ordinary two-male protagonists. It seems that there is not too much "intervention" at the moment. It is like the author telling such a story and letting it happen naturally. The description of the setting of another world "Xianzhou" is also quite good (this should not be counted as MOBA). The details of the fighting and "surrender" are very good, especially the description after "surrender", which really made my eyes shine. Overall, there is no water character, and the logic is relatively rigorous. You can take a look.

Hot face and cold face are the best match. This setting of Brother Control has always poked me. The one with a little paranoia should be the one below (point to the jpg.) [I am a Shang Control, if I said something wrong, I am really sorry ಥ_ಥ] I really like the way Xiaoluo and Tan family get along, and the friends around them are all good babies (except for the ugly guy who used Xiaoluo's photos to cheat money) Then Xiaoluo's genetic disease will be cured, right? What the system says can be cured is true, right? I don't want to be, and I don't want to die twice [crying] Add another sentence: I want to see my brother and Xiaoluo meet つ♡⊂ Congratulations on the completion. Instead of stepping on my bad points, they danced crazily on my XP. The cold-faced cuteness and warm-faced ones are a perfect match. It's completely made from a simple background, with entertainment industry elements + pastoral elements + online game elements, daily sweet stories, and a little bit of family affection. There is no excessive description of appearance (the most annoying to me), the writing is moderate, the characters are well developed, and the emotional line can be said to be very complete in Yang Persimmon. There are no excessive logical problems, but the last few chapters are a bit sad and break the fourth wall. I am fortunate to have my book review appear in the text in the form of a wish. Xiaotan and Xiaoluo will always be happy, and so will Dada. Then I'm just looking forward to Dada's next book. ૮ ´͈ ᗜ `͈ ა♡

A very good book! I read it in one breath, and I didn't feel any discomfort, nor did I have any thoughts of stopping halfway. It was very comfortable and warm to read. Just looking at it makes me want to play "Xianzhou", but unfortunately there is no such game in the real world, \(°o°)/. Talking about Xiao Zhi and Xu Luo, these two names are really catchy and nice to hear. From the "confrontation couple" in the game, to the person who mistakenly thought Xiao Tan was Qin XX, to the relationship getting closer step by step, and then to being together. (Suddenly a sentence came to mind, if he runs away and chases him, he will be unable to fly) Xu Sheng loves his younger brother Xu Luo very much, and Xu Luo loves his older brother Xu Sheng very much. Let me see the noble love between relatives. One of their brothers controls the other, which is very good. Finally, when Xiao Luo Gene recovered from his illness, I was really happy (∩_∩) Xiao Luo Jian was healthy and happy. System 1033 is also great, very cute. I keep reporting to the main system for Xiaoluo. Thank you for your hard work! I hope they in the book and us outside the book are all healthy and everything goes well.

So far, the writing is very good, the overall rhythm is very comfortable, the writing is long and flowing, and the story is eloquent. The writing style is also relatively delicate, and the image of the characters is also very clear. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot development. The affection between brothers really touches me! We are also looking forward to the development of Xu Luohe and Tan Xiaozhi's emotional line! I hope the author will continue to work hard!

It's so beautiful, Shuang Jie is pure love, the emotional line between the two is quite smooth, there are no hardships. My brother is also a very strong and good brother, and the family line is also well written. The integration of the game Xianzhou did not make the text very procrastinating and boring. Instead, there were many plot nodes, which were cleverly designed and very interesting [licking the screen]. I was reading the book reviews when I was halfway through the book, and I saw a lot of them with very sad endings. I thought I was going to die, so I looked through the table of contents, and I felt relieved when I saw Resurrection A. In fact, the ending is not very sad, but more touching, and I was moved by the emotions of many people. Many people pray for the same person in different places and in different ways. It is a tree covered with prayer signs, blessings from volunteer workers and children in the welfare home, and blessings and prayers from relatives and friends. Maybe they don't know each other well or they don't know each other at all, but they all unanimously send blessings to the person who is suffering from illness. I think it's not abusive, but rather sublimates the emotion of the article. I also wish everyone who is suffering from the disease a speedy recovery, so all readers are safe and well. [Bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one] [bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one]

It's very beautiful. I originally wanted to watch a cookie, but I didn't expect it to make me burst into tears. Of course the ending is good. This article has family, friendship and love aspects. The only thing that makes me personally regretful is that what Lin Luo did was so great and perfect, and his final choice is actually very understandable. But the only unsatisfactory thing about watching a little love dessert at night is that when he was going to die, he didn't seem to think too much about talking about it. It made people feel that it didn't matter as long as my brother was safe. The world didn't matter and I could die peacefully. It's like thinking that you will forget me after I die. There is not even a feeling of regret, of course there may be such a feeling, but the author did not write it out, or I did not notice it.

It's so delicious, woo woo, the knife in the back made me pee in my eyes, woo woo. I was a little excited after watching it The emotions are very well written, from family, friendship to love, the emotions are so delicately written [cry] [cry] [cry] (go to hell with my poor vocabulary [cry]) The plot at the end is a bit fantasy but it conforms to the logic of this novel. It's a bit fantasy when written from a perspective that breaks the dimensional wall, but it's so delicious. It's a very interesting perspective. By the end of the paragraph, it has really integrated with the idea of the novel. I just want the young lovers to be together [crying][crying][crying] I was so excited after reading this that I quickly wrote a book review. Later, when my brain calmed down, I had a different view. It's delicious [sending heart] [blowing kiss]

Very good, I like it very much. Whether it is the progress of the main CP or the insertion of the deputy CP, it is very harmonious. The only thing I don't like is when I can make a wish for the first time. I feel that I can actually research a drug to treat genetic diseases in the near future. In this case, I don't have to make a wish alone. No. Letting my brother get a genetic disease, but then I thought again, Xu Luo has this disease himself. He has experienced the pain, so he doesn't want his brother to experience it, which is normal. After all, his original intention from the beginning was for his brother. Although there were twists and turns, he was happy in the end, which was good. But if a vicious person like me would write it to him, haha.