Dad, Don't Panic! I'll Take My Hotheaded Daddy to Find You

Okay, overall it's pretty good. People with insensitive personalities can join. After all, there are still some permanent flaws. But if I want to sum it up seriously, (Preliminary summary, I don't mean to scold the cook. I only have my personal opinions and suggestions to support the rebuttal. After all, I am not a Bodhisattva and I have not synchronized the brain centers of all humans) 1. The subject matter is quite novel. After all, this type of book is relatively rare. The writing style is adequate, but sometimes it is a bit formatted. The author's personal style can be enhanced in every word and sentence, which will make it more vivid and memorable, and not too boring. 2. The character creation is a bit too flat and stereotyped. The puzzle pieces given so far do not allow me to piece together their independent personalities. I look forward to the follow-up. After all, piecing together puzzles requires step-by-step. However, if it is for impatient readers, it may cause some people to abandon the book, so the plot rhythm (or the freshness for readers) must also be accelerated. 3. (Search for the word "regret" in the full text search) After I saw how many times he regretted the words as soon as he said them, I realized that it is so easy to say the wrong thing and then regret it again. You can change it appropriately, otherwise the plot will be a bit tired. 4. I feel that I was very frustrated in the early stages of being a child. I never relaxed completely for a moment. I was constantly being fucked. I can give some transitional periods that are calmer and daily. It should be calm but not dull. I should also give the protagonist some good mood, so that the text can also give the audience positive emotions at the same time. 5. Before Chapter 25 (around), it's not an exaggeration to say that I feel extremely uncomfortable, but after reading it, I feel that it has been choking. If you combine it with experience, you can understand it. It's a little too much, and it may look a bit awkward, but if you think about the logic of character formation, it won't be serious. 6. The emotional line deserves to be emphasized. I still haven't figured out whether Shou has feelings for Shou, whether he still hates him or is already secretly moved. (One more thing, after Shou has been helped several times, in the plot that I have seen now, based on the original emotional basis, the goodwill will not rise so fast, and he will enter the jealous stage so quickly) But regarding point 6, it makes sense if their feelings in another world affect this side, then every second is a bridge, gradually assimilating the feelings on this side to the feelings on the other side, the theory of parallel universe is invincible! ♪ Judging from my overall aesthetic evaluation of this book, this is the only one that is the fault of Tomato, and it deserves better, at least not with the current traffic (this is what I thought after reading a book with poor writing but many people are following it) If you can see this, it means that you are very serious. I also want to say thank you. I wish you all the best and make a fortune every year~ Maybe I'm too picky, but my expectations for the introduction were indeed somewhat disappointed by the text, not much. One more thing, those with a sensitive personality should be cautious before entering. I am a different kind of controlled person. Although I really like to watch bullies being tortured, but if you put aside the bullies (someone chases his wife in the crematorium, changes his attack, does not forgive or counterattacks and is cured), I will become controlled again, so the evaluation I make is also formed under the influence of my perspective and emotions.

It's just that it's easy to explode when you're in a bad mood... It's not a normal explosion. It explodes at the slightest touch. My temper is also very explosive. It ignites at the slightest touch...😶

It's really super pretty! ! ! ! The author's writing is really very good, very very good! ! ! ! ! The brushwork is delicate and everything is described clearly. The only fly in the ointment is... Boss, can you put something sweet? I feel so sad, please give me some sweets! ! ! And, boss, I hope you will update 100,000 words in three days (I'm really curious about how many thousands of words this book will have at the end, please hurry up and update it. It's really not enough and it's killing me) [crying] [crying] No one knows about good works😦

It's pretty good-looking, but why don't you have a mouth? 😦 I almost collapsed when I saw it [stunned] [stunned] [stunned], please confess! I want to see a sweet couple [laugh][laugh][laugh] Not bad, I like it🥰

It's so beautiful and so delicious [Adoration]

It's so beautiful. Even now, the emotional lines are very delicate, and the baby is also very cute. I feel like I can't get enough of it [Blow kiss]

It's so beautiful, I can't stop watching it

It's so beautiful, so special, so sweet\(//∇//)\

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking٩(•̤̀ᵕ•̤́๑)ᵒᵏᵎᵎᵎᵎ

Looks good, I like it