I Told You to Pretend to Be a Saintess, So Why Are You More Convincing Than Her?

It has been tied. The quality is much higher than I thought. It is a heavy book. The content inside is very realistic and dark. It does not simply kill, but it gives people a numb feeling and makes people smile bitterly. If I were the protagonist, I might not be able to survive and become Ilia. Instead, I collapsed first. The kindness of the protagonist is very touching. There is no discomfort caused by the Virgin. Ilia is not simply cold-blooded, but I think the development of her character is still a bit stiff, but it is still very good. Excellent work.

"Dedicated to Artemis" is one of my most regrettable novels. This book has his shadow. The most regrettable thing is that the author deleted it and ran away. I relied on the masterpiece of Western fantasy, the heroine has a golden spirit, and I digress. My evaluation of this novel is quite satisfactory. Let me talk about the shortcomings first. I always say that the heroine saved a cat, and it is almost read to death. Our protagonist is a kind person, has she not done other good things? . There is also our true saint, her plot twist is a bit short. I know the author wants to create a character with an iron fist and a ruthless heart. It is inevitable to make sacrifices in order to let more people survive. I can only say that the portrayal is bland. I can only say that the author's proportions are not bad enough. Let's talk about the plot. It's missing (tension). For example, the heroine's identity is exposed and dangers arise, sowing the seeds of doubt in the eyes of others. There is an appropriate sense of crisis, and the plot feels a bit too smooth. Finally, the relationship between the two heroines, the more I watch it, the more it looks like a gay friendship. Let's talk about the advantages again. The main character is written as a fake saint. He is kind but will not be resented by readers. Chalk is for class. Author, I have only written half of my review of this book. However, I want to complain about chapters 62 and 63. In reality, I want to ask about the explosive mentality and the plot where the devil makes the true saint and evil thoughts appear. When it comes to jealousy, shouldn't she be jealous of the heroine? With the rights and status I have fought for for 20 years, you only need to learn from me to gain respect. Why should I make a wedding dress for you? Is this the result of my efforts? "Those idiots are not worthy of your protection at all." Those damn untouchables are so ignorant and ignorant, being played around by those old and immortal nobles, it's really troublesome. "How would they look at you if they knew the truth?" Those old immortals are really made to be puppets, eating human flesh and bone marrow. In essence, they are no different from monsters. Why should I care about them hiding my identity? Haven't I done enough for this country? I am a saint, why should I listen to you? I really want to kill you all as monsters. Isn't it right that the evil in your heart is more than the total number of 100 people? Xuan suppressed and suggested this kind of plot. Although it is normal for the saint to not understand this knowledge, it is 20 years after all. She grabbed the heroine's neck and came close to bite her hard, "Let me bully her." Even if you can't do violence, isn't this okay? The author had to use his brain to use homophones. How could there be sexual tension without some tricks? How can readers be happy? Let me withdraw from the group and vent those hypocritical pretense. "Jealous. I'm jealous of people who don't have to deal with that. People who can laugh freely, cry freely, love freely." I'm jealous, why should I be willing to abide by those rules and regulations, why can't I use my rights freely with peace of mind, even like those ordinary people? Why can't I be arrogant? It has been proven many times that I am the only one who is right. What qualifications do those people who cheat on others have? Question me Author of Desire Desire, are you afraid that you won't be able to pass the trial? What if we carry what we love to watch? My arms are becoming more and more suffocating, and I want to melt the person in my arms into flesh and blood. My desire for you is challenging my nerves all the time, and my eyes are like a wild beast that wants to eat the person in my arms. Author, this is either a writing guide or simply not interesting enough. What makes me speechless the most is that there are more evils than 100 people. If this were the only thing, then the world would be too kind.

The new book will probably have 30,000 to 400,000 words. I'm looking forward to it. I can give you some suggestions [laughs]

It's very good. The plot is very fast-paced, but it's all logical and foreshadowing, so it doesn't seem too abrupt. The relationship between the protagonists also feels natural, and there's no inexplicable feeling that things just got better. Highly recommended

The writing is quite good. He tells a story about the hypocrisy of religion and the eternal oppression of class society. And the painful struggle of the ruling class between ideals (ideologies) and reality (structures of oppression). The tension of this gap shocks readers, and also sublimates this story of intertwined fantasy and reality.

The feeling given to me by the two protagonists is that Hess is a true saint. Illya is the leader of civilization, holding a torch high, and is the most conspicuous presence in the long night. She may also be obscured by the haze, but the direction of progress will never change. (The current plot. Ilia is obviously in a period of confusion. And the appearance of Hess dispels the haze.) Of the two characters, I like Illya better [laughs]

The content is good and the emotional description is delicate. Deduction of one star: In the later stage, it was written that the heroine did not become a saint and marry an ordinary man. It also emphasized that she would give birth to a few ordinary children and live an ordinary life. It felt a bit like Nanbang. I don't know what the meaning of describing this period is. [Chigua]

I was just browsing through books on the subway out of boredom, but I discovered a treasure. The early writing was really touching, and even led me to think about good and evil. Although it may feel a little out of the outline in the middle and later stages, the overall plot design is still quite exciting and will not make people feel bored. I recommend giving it a try. There is a bit of a yandere element, but it doesn't make people feel overly paranoid. It can be said to be a growth type, and both protagonists are growing up. All in all, I felt great. I finished reading it in one day. It's worth reading.

This book is really good, with a good sense of scale, dark but not desperate, acting but not pretentious. If you were to write a long novel without sacrificing too much quality, it would be a masterpiece.

I consider this book to be a god, and I love it very much. The emotion aspect is perfectly rendered, and the knife stabs the heart, not forgetting to stir it a few times. It made me think about the meaning of life. Although I can't bear to part with it, I still have to let it go. I estimate that the rating of this book is more than 7.9. If it is lower, I will give up.