Deep Sequence: Starting at Level 0

Give it a five-star rating. It's actually less than three stars. The concept is actually very good. It can be seen that this work also condenses some love and emotion, but unfortunately, the writing is not good... Personally, I feel that the author's comfort zone should be in horror and suspense, because the opening The back room part of the chapter and the horror scenes interspersed in the subsequent plot are all very well created, especially the listening experience is excellent, just like reading a high-level supernatural novel, but as soon as I write about other plots, about blood, progress, upgrades, teams, and so on, I feel dizzy. Stack the armor first, I don't hate this subject matter, even if it is well written, it will definitely be a super bonus, but, but. I really didn't write it well... In short, if the author specializes in horror and thriller novels, it will be much better than this one. I think the most exciting part of this novel is the part involving fear.

The plot makes people want to watch it. It is female-centered and does not give way to neutral words. It will use "boy" and other words without dissatisfaction with women. At present, it seems that the ratio of women to men is very comfortable. I'll comment on the rest after I finish reading it.

It's a female-oriented novel. The front part is set in a back room (because I haven't seen the back room yet). Female fans have been suffering from the back room for a long time [crying] It seems that the logic is rigorous, the characters are well created, and the writing is delicate. I hope the author can continue to write more! [Blowing kiss]

It's a good book, but it's not critical, the content is meaningful, the pace is tight, and the characters are not one-sided, but very rich. The girls are very neat and not sloppy. Excellent writing

The inspiration is okay, and he seems to have the ambition to open up his own world view, but now I see that most of it still relies on the back room setting. And I am very worried, because the back room is not something that can be arbitrarily incorporated and improved. It is not a high-end fabric waiting to be spliced, but a complete whole. This has the risk of imitating a cat and imitating a tiger, which is not the opposite of a dog, and superfluous. The back room is a very clean and tidy thing. If you add weird rules and weird rules, it will easily fall into a vague and unclear setting. She is the heroine, good reviews, no inappropriate words, good reviews However, the author's writing style and logic are somewhat unsatisfactory. I hope he will sharpen his skills and become a great master soon. Let's give an example: I took the express delivery upstairs, but I completely forgot about the puddles I stepped on. There was a sense of beauty that I didn't forget to eat but not to fight. The last second I read the rules and saw someone, I ran away quickly, but when I heard my old girl's voice, I got carried away and became angry and refused to run. How about you even take a few steps to increase the distance? Could you please give me some reaction? Fearful of monsters, strong-willed, but always making noise when hiding in a cabinet. The BOSS hit the door and stood there stunned. It was clearly agreed that one teammate would scout the way and the remaining two would look out, but a strange man with a weapon stood out and the two of them screamed. The logic didn't work. Can such a big person be invisible? In an all-male camp, as a hedge, a female senior executive was hired to teach the rules... There is a beauty in conflict for the sake of conflict. In addition, use less buzzwords in the writing... When two people are communicating, the heroine's narration suddenly says "Oh, don't worry, I can't handle it." Adults don't talk about life and death. Suddenly, "Oh, no, no." I feel that the author is very young, but there are good things going on, and there is a lot of room for improvement. Such a brave article shows that he has started to do practical things rather than just talk, so he better work hard. Five-star support

It's tied, it looks great! The author has a sense of loving his daughter, and he will reply and replace any words about disobedience to women mentioned in book reviews, which is a rare and big bonus [blowing kiss] (Ps. In the future, the author can also replace bad luck with bad luck, and poison with beetles [give heart]) The writing is top notch in Tomato, and so is the plot! I was originally worried that the setting of "The Back Room" would be scary, but I thought this one was okay, mainly because of the good plot. I like the protagonist Lin Yao very much, and I also like the maternal female characters in it. Every character in the current team is very three-dimensional, and the overall viewing experience is very comfortable. Lin Yao's past has made me feel deeply sympathetic and want to cry many times... I have tweeted it to my friends, don't let it down [shy]

It's good to read. The descriptions of urban ghost stories are very interesting. The weird and chilling feeling in the back is also vividly written. The writing is good and the words are appropriate. There are no degrading words. I recommend it. After reading it, I found that I really like the description of stream of consciousness. The psychedelic feeling of the tide is very right. I wonder if the author has read some prose or Japanese literature. There are a few paragraphs in the middle that have that flavor, the feeling of a hazy dream. The writing is very good and the story is exciting and interesting.

It seems that it is quite comfortable so far, and the plot is also very interesting. There are no disgusting descriptions in some male videos, but it is still more comfortable for female videos.

I've read a few chapters and it feels good, but I don't know about the back room or anything. Currently I only know about popular ones like Running Group/Cthulhu, but not knowing it doesn't affect my viewing. It's quite similar to Infinite Streaming. It's very interesting, I finished it in one sitting. The heroine is not a morally good person, it depends on your own willingness to accept it. [Sending my heart] Personally, I feel that the current characters are very full, such as pilot whale, bamboo leaf green, queen ant, hen (the world cannot be without hens!) And so on. The characters in it are not perfect, and they are usually gray. I look forward to the update of the boss [Sending my heart]

I have seen Chapter 70 so far, which is a back room + heroine + female group portrait, a setting that is rare to see. I originally read a few chapters because a man wanted to join the team, so I gave up. Later I found out that the author said he was no longer available, so I picked it up again. It is of unexpectedly high quality, the plot and writing are excellent, and sometimes there is a kind of dry humor. The heroine's psychological description of fear when she is struggling to survive alone is very good. Some people in the comments said that other plots are straight away. I like it very much. If you are alone in this kind of environment, you will be driven crazy sooner or later. The women who appear on the stage are all very unique. Seeing them feel safe when they appear on stage makes people breathe a sigh of relief and hope that there will be no big swords in the future.