Tomb-Raiding Livestream: From the Start, I Play Zhang the Mute

This performance is quite similar to Zhang Qiling's character. There's no cliché pretentious slap in the face. He doesn't save people who like to seek death. Keep up the good work, author, and don't stop updating [Like] [Like]

It's super good-looking, the characters are vivid, and the temperament of the little brother is well portrayed. The fight scenes are also very smooth, neither Madonna nor Destruction Kadokura. Much more to come!

The fighting scenes are okay, the characters are consistent, and the logic sometimes doesn't make sense. It feels like the author has written out his own voice. The subject of two Zhang Qiling meeting is quite novel, but I have a problem. The original novel is Nen Niu Wu Fang. What direction do you decide now whether to write about two men or six people (Xiu Xiu is not counted)

It looks good, the author's writing style is very good, Zhang Qiling's character is not broken, and the other Zhang Qiling is so good, his character is not broken at all. The author also said that they are two male protagonists, but they are brothers. And I like the pretentious part at the beginning the best. Brother Cool Sa, double happiness. The Iron Triangle is together again, and Hei Xiazi, Jie Xiaohua, and Huo Xiuxiu are all there. The most important thing is that Wu Xie himself has begun to awaken his memory. I always feel familiar with him.

How should I put it, the novel's description of Zhang Qiling is not OOC, it describes his loneliness and the process of losing his memory. The writing style is also okay. It's not all the author's own ideas, but it's a bit of a book-keeping style. I personally don't like this kind of writing very much. I think it's a bit dull. Of course, I don't mean to say bad. Everyone has their own preferences. As for the content, it was okay at first, it was able to attract people, and the fighting scenes were interesting to watch, but later on it became very strange. The first is Zhang Qiling's version. The author gives the Yang Yang version that comes out first, and the Liang Yuxiao version that comes out later. But isn't this convenient for readers to distinguish? The people in the article should not know it, but the author does not seem to be aware of this problem. Moreover, even if there is another world in the article, Yang Yang and Liang Yuxiao are there, no one will bring in what kind of brother they are. Secondly, the issue of how to get some things is not clear, such as the jade cicada and the black sheet with a curse. There are many places where they are used as keys. It is not written every time and then taken back after use. I remember that it is clearly written in other places. I don't know why it is not written clearly here. It is easy for people to misunderstand whether this thing is consumed or retained. Finally, the transition in some places written by the author is not natural enough, and there are many doubts. For example, the systematic strength is given by the system (probably, I think so at the moment). Why does the unsystematic one also recover his strength when he gets the strength recovery reward systematically? And in some places, others are not told that Zhang Qiling has night vision, but others know it. Zhang Qiling used blood to fight off danger more than once, but said that people who have been there since the first adventure do not know about it, which is very strange. The above are my personal views and opinions. I made the evaluation after reading all the updates. There may be some differences from the actual situation written in the article, but I hope it can help the author and readers. Oh, by the way, there are some places in the article where the content is repeatedly described. Although it is meant to emphasize, too much repetition makes people feel boring. It is recommended that the author change the expression or metaphor when repeating the description, and try not to repeat the previous description.

It's pretty cool, but isn't this acting? Why does it feel like the protagonist is lost? Even with the anchor point of the system, I can't remember myself, and slowly I feel like I only have two spirits?

The expressions are clear, and the acting fits the character of the little brother very well. At least in my mind, it is very good. I like the little brother very much. The author must not stop updating it.

I want to see the two spirits [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss], the sympathy between the two brothers [crying] [crying] [crying], only you know yourself best! ! ! !

Very nice! The writing is very good! Come on, author, never stop updating.

It's awesome, great, and very well written. I really like this fight scene, and the emotions are also very delicate. Well, if you don't like TV dramas, you may feel a little uncomfortable. Just skip the first part, and the later part will be very good.