Doomsday Escape: It Begins with Awakening the Five Elements Sequence

It seems okay so far, but I feel the protagonist's personality should be changed a bit. For example, he could be made to have principles, meaning he wouldn't kill indiscriminately, but would fight if someone caused trouble. As for the captain's personality, I think we could refer to the captain's personality in Chen Ye's book. I remember the line, "There are very few humans left; we can't kill indiscriminately." Overall, it seems good so far. Keep up the good work, author!

Of the rest of the convoy, only the protagonist is the least protagonist-like—too useless. The conman directly obtained spatial skills by deceiving others ⊙⊙🙂, and at least at Tier 1 🙂. There's also a Tier 2, who awakens martial willpower at a life-or-death moment 🍉. Another Tier 2 physical ability user withstands Tier 3 attacks 🍉. And then there's the team leader, a standard guide 🍉.

I think it's pretty good, but I still have to mention some potential downsides. The protagonist isn't the strongest, or even strong; many other characters have already reached unknown tiers, while the protagonist is only at tier two. Among all the teammates, the protagonist is the second weakest. The protagonist's cheat abilities are also weak.

First, my review: the writing is a bit immature, but the plot is quite good so far. I hope there won't be any major flaws later on. Also, the word count is too low. Author, keep it up, or I'll show you what a book-raising experience is like! 😄😄😄 PS: Actually, I was going to read Chen Ye's book, but I was unexpectedly drawn in.

The writing style is unique, humorous, and distinctive. The protagonist is overpowered in the early stages and establishes a base quickly, but this will likely lead to instability later on. The characters are relatively one-dimensional and lack depth. While it's understandable for the protagonist to be selfish, value his life, lack a saintly side, and be lustful, these are all human traits.

I quite like the plot; it's somewhat similar to another novel with a sequel. However, one of the veteran characters is immortal. Based on that alone, and the first dozen or so chapters, I'd give it four or five stars. But seeing the Demon-Slaying Tree later on was really off-putting. I really like the line, "There's no sacrifice too great to accept, no betrayal too small to tolerate."

Overall rating: Four stars. The protagonist's development was indeed a bit slow in the early stages, only truly becoming stronger around level 50. Plot: So far, there are no major flaws. Hopefully, characters like Su Wei, Li Yueming, and others will have their own shining moments.

Overall, it ranks above average for this type of work. The writing style is its biggest weakness. So far, there are no idiotic or offensive moments. The characters are subtly cunning, and the story is quite humorous and funny. The characters are decisive and ruthless, which I enjoy reading. I hope it doesn't become idiotic later on. I'd give it around four stars. Keep it up!

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It's alright. The protagonist seems too weak, and once the Deceiver sequence comes out, what chance do the other sequences have? They just declare him the winner. As it stands, it's unclear how the Deceiver will perform later, but leveling up is incredibly easy in the early game.