Lord: Conquering All Worlds, Starting with a Magical Earth!

The world view is interesting, especially the description of the boar skin is very essential and the characters are vivid. It is not a straightforward flat narrative. It is lively and interesting and worth watching.

The worldview is very interesting, but the author's time flow rate could be improved if possible. It's a bit toxic. This is what I saw in Chapter 7: "The flow of time on both sides is not equal..." Bai Ye murmured to himself, a glint flashing in his eyes, "A whole day has passed in the other world, but only a few minutes here? This means that I have enough time to check information and make preparations in the real world, without having to worry about the situation over there suddenly collapsing." This is what I saw in Chapter 8: Bai Ye silently estimated the time in his mind. He stayed on Earth for almost five hours, checking information, posting posts, and browsing forums, and was so busy that he never touched the ground. The sky here has only transitioned from dusk to night. According to the physical sense, only about half an hour has passed in the other world. "Is there a ten to one time flow difference?" This difference in time flow is a huge advantage.

Five stars Nice book. Although it is traveling between two worlds, because there will be battles between lords, it can be regarded as the heavens in disguise, but I don't know if the system of other worlds can be used. The current difficulty is how to break the situation on the protagonist's side. The zombies are too strong and the protagonist's power is too weak. As long as the opponent has a little free time, they can kill everyone on the protagonist's side.

There is something new and it is finally better than a bunch of online game mode lords. Just look at the follow-up reality part, and wonder whether the thankless description of the official organization will be as messed up as most people are.

Five stars for encouragement, take your time. (Stacked armor) At least the author of this book is alive, so I will try my best to say it. If it makes everyone, especially the author, unhappy, please ignore me. This Yun Fei is a very bad point. It's not that this character is bad, but the story that happened to this character is bad and very bad! It's exactly like the female channel's formula of "a charming and savage princess who is doted on by the male protagonist to the death". To be honest, it's disgusting that this kind of story happens in a Lord of War novel. Then there is the rhythm and progress of the story. It is still in the early stage of the story to write down the small details of daily stories and strength development as it is now. It can be regarded as a supplement to the setting. However, you can feel it and the author also said Kawen. There is a high probability that the author does not know how to continue writing (the lack of an outline is very likely). The suggestion is to describe more details of the war, such as some local wars or pre-war decisions and reversals during the war. You can describe more small characters to enrich the character story [If the main theme of this book is the emperor's uncle, it doesn't matter] Finally... If you really can't handle the setting of traveling between two worlds, you can make it vague. For example, the author has also written it in the story, right? Just insert a sentence occasionally in the story to say that you have gone back to a certain moment. After all, there is a label of ten thousand worlds, and the author can change the map and change the map back without any burden to lengthen the story. Just take your time. I have recently read several books that were good at the beginning but suddenly fell off a cliff, so I am numb now.

There are many female protagonists, leading the mainstream good grass, giving a five-star encouragement, eating what is edible, not slowing down the pace, and not pulling the strings.

Wonderful, multi-female lord story, with extraordinary features. The main plot in the early stage should be to use modern technology to manage local areas and counterattack Dragonfly, with lord PVP elements. Everyone has talked about other issues, but I only have one request: don't write it in real PVP in the early stage, and don't write it in the official website.

The writing is good, the settings are well written, the plot rhythm is not sluggish, and the beginning can attract readers.

Subharasi, Golden Chapter 3 is in my strike zone.

Okay, it's quite distinctive.