The Haunted Gate: There's a Ghost Inside Me

It's okay. The setting is quite attractive, a bit like a treacherous house. The design of the copy should be good, but the author's writing style is not very good and I can't express that feeling. But overall it's still okay and you can take a look.

It's okay, the copy is quite interesting, and the writing is pretty good, so go for it, author! 😘 But I just think that Jiang Yangming said that he has been through the ghost gate more than twenty times, right? But I don't seem to be that smart 🤔

@ Frog Hello, author. I hope your next copy can be a little longer. The first few copies felt a bit fast-paced. At the same time, the dungeon only needs to survive for 3 days. I feel that it is too fast and I cannot feel the excitement of surviving through time-limited decryption. If the protagonist is illiterate, is it possible for the protagonist to enter the dungeon alone? The participants will make a fuss when explaining the rules, intentionally or unintentionally misleading the protagonist and causing variables. At present, it seems a bit too conventional. It is said in the book that the rules next to the door are accurate, but the illiteracy can be used to advance the plot and make the protagonist get tricked several times. The protagonist will also be more motivated to learn literacy because he has stepped on the pit. In addition, it seems that the setting that the new team can accompany the protagonist into the dungeon companion test is not so appropriate. Even if you are a veteran but enter a rules-based dungeon, there is still a chance that you will overturn. Although the Werewolf part is for the second game, the protagonist can quickly establish an advantage and play the prophet. In "", it would not seem too rigid if Wang Lan was asked to explore the road and try out the rules for finding the groom. But veterans shouldn't put themselves in danger just to test newbies. This setting makes me feel that there is no danger in entering the dungeon, plus ghosts can take over and give participants various abilities. For experienced players, it's like playing house and going in for a spin. Maybe they are used to reading other similar novels. Usually, no matter how experienced these participants are, they will be in awe of the fact that even if it is a novice village, there is still a possibility of overturning. I hope that the next dungeon can see the difficulty of the dungeon be strengthened or the abilities of humans be restricted. At present, the ghost side is still too weak. The scary atmosphere can be further enhanced. Come on, get better and better ❤️

Whether it is the creation of the main and supporting characters or the description of the overall plot, the most impressive thing is the word "new", which is obviously different from other similar novels. Furthermore, the overall writing style of Tomato is considered to be "above average". The two combined can be read in one go. After all, there are still too few novels that can make people's eyes shine. Highly recommended However, I don't know if it's my misunderstanding. I feel that the protagonist looks like "Zhang Fei". He is usually very smart, but sometimes he is very "emotional". It's a bit uncomfortable, but it's not a big problem. Five stars

Not bad The protagonist's character is retributive, steady, careful, and not chaotic when encountering difficulties. 1: Not too paranoid when cooperation is needed, and knows how to cooperate 2: There is a reason for revenge, and there is no resentment just because of a word 3: I don't panic immediately when I see a ghost and don't know what to do. Although I am stunned, it is a normal reaction 4: I have decision-making when taking revenge 5: I am very careful 6: For the chef who knows that he stole the steamed buns (there is no need to kill the other party just because of swearing, it can be seen that the protagonist is not a real bad guy) Points are awarded for writing I feel like the author lacks a bit of imagination, the article has little sense of urgency, and the description of ghosts also feels like that. Because the dialogue between the protagonist and the ghost sister made me feel that the ghost is just like that, not scary at all. Although the ghost sister is an important person who gives news to the protagonist, it is because of this that the ghost is not scary. The introduction says fast-paced. With this label, your imagination is tested. Come on, author. I hope the author can really write the game of human nature well. If the ghost is not particularly terrifying, it will depend on the person's wits. If it is not written well, it will violate the introduction. And people shouldn't write too stupidly. I am most satisfied with the author's portrayal of the female character. Fortunately, he did not describe the female character's figure. Infinite Flow focuses on reasoning, and character description focuses on the character's personality at first glance.

Personally, I think it's pretty good. The plot settings are very unique. The writing is not outstanding but it's fluent. It's at a good level in Tomato, so I think it's worth a read. (I'm a listening reader and have already tied the latest chapter. I want to ask the author why he gets angry when someone mentions the protagonist of "Beggars Gang"?)

This book is very well written. Although the elements of the door are very popular, the author also incorporated his own imagination, such as [approval]... A very novel direction, Bai Lan, the secret of letting himself join, and Jiang Qiong's own secret. The logical reasoning is very strict and the thinking is active, which attracts us to read. I hope the author can keep writing, I want to see the finale! I also hope that Frog will make rainbows on the way to writing😊

Okay, it's just that there are too few chapters. Just raise, raise, raise, raise, raise, raise, raise, raise, raise, raise.

This book is readable. It's similar to The Conspiracy. The author's writing style is also good. It's a new book with great potential. I have only read Chapter 20 now. I still don't know what the gatekeeper means. It may be that I can gain the ability of the female ghost. I hope the protagonist can have more abilities. The later copies can be more difficult.

Keep up the good work, author. I'll update a hundred chapters every day, okay? I don't ask too much, so don't stop updating. (PS: I think Bai Lan is so annoying. The protagonist will not really be a team with her in the end. If I don't like her, I feel that she has an inexplicable desire to control and plunder other people's abilities and opportunities.)