[Read without using your brain] [No female lead] [Pseudo-System] [Invincible] [Genshin Impact mysticism + Honkai: Star Rail Paths and pathways; character personalities will stay as close to the originals as possible. Mind games? There’ll be plenty of fun, and the pace will probably be fast.
A lighthearted story. Please don’t flame it.]
A traveler from another world sets foot on this mad land.
He wields the power of the seven elements and carries the order of the Paths. Powerful yet gentle, he seeks to rebuild a fallen world and give it a new beginning.
A Fool who thinks he is a transmigrator collides with a mask that smiles forever and never tires. From then on, Lord of the Mysteries has a new name.
Life and death reversed, time and space rewoven, order remade;
water, fire, wind, rock, grass, lightning, and ice: the seven powers unite to redefine the laws of heaven and earth.
Life grants all beings infinite possibilities;
Death brings an end to all madness and distortion;
Time lets the past, present, and future exist together;
Space gathers countless realities into one world.
Sorrow will be sung of as something past,
suffering will eventually fade with time,
because this fallen, mad, and chaotic world
will at last welcome its very own
[Reason].
It looks good, and it can be seen that the author understands these worldviews very well, but the main plot is a bit slow. Klein can appear more and hold more Tarot sessions. When I was watching Lord of Mysteries, I really liked the feeling of a divine being appearing in front of others in Tarot Club. We've also mentioned the fateful guys. Why can't we write down a few fateful guys so that Tarot masters can do a dozen of them? Didn't Audrey have access to memory? Then we can incinerate the industry. And Amon, I've long wanted to see him lose his temper 😏 The exterminator, even the top four in Dian Lao, are pretty good, let them see the ruthless work that Dian Lao can do 😏 Come on, author! It's rare to see something that suits my taste so much. Don't stop updating it. I'll watch it every day.
The writing is really good, I am familiar with various settings, there is no sense of fragmentation when integrated, and the logic is smooth. It's just that the control of the plot is slightly lacking, it's a little too out-of-the-box and incoherent, and it feels like I'm writing whatever comes to mind, and the multi-perspective writing method requires too much writing skills. Even if it continues like this, it will be over 9 points, or even 9.5.
It's very interesting, and I will give you a small advertisement every day. By the way, is there still a chance to remedy the seal?
Advantages: The worldview is well integrated. I think it can be said to be a combination of Sora and the memory of the time traveler. The disadvantage is that the protagonist feels like he is shouldering the burden of the world on his shoulders, which is not quite in line with the mentality of a traveler in a Genshin Impact story.
What's really interesting is how you plan to write about Ke Maomao's experience.
Oh my God, it's so beautiful I hope to give Klein some growth events, so that the protagonist can solve the problem of out-of-control mental skills that have not been strengthened by various previous events.
Oh my god, it looks really good. The world view is not only handled very reasonably, but the plot is also quite innovative and logical. Thank you very much 👍👍👍
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Various settings, well integrated 👍👍👍
The writing is very good, very good. Come on, come on, come on 😏, please write more.