My Children Are Ungrateful, So This Old Man Is Reborn to Cultivate Immortality

The writing is good, but it has nothing to do with cultivating immortality. Xiu Xian was only given an official status, and the rest were just short-lived. I feel that the author could write an article "Unfilial children and grandchildren, the old man is reborn and takes the imperial examination." After all, fifty-year-old children can also take the imperial examination.

Qinman Siheyuan Cultivation Edition But the author tells the gossip from the perspective of the village aunt Actually not bad

The perspective of the new book is quite good, but the world where Golden Finger of the Immortal Atlas is located should not be another world! In other words, it is a different development under the tributaries of time. If the protagonist does not reach a certain level and is unified, the ending will probably remain the same? Is it true that everyone can practice cultivation in this world? No restrictions like spiritual roots?

The author is a god, and the characters are well drawn, but they are a bit facial. The most prominent characters are the old lady and the sister-in-law, which are disgusting enough, but there is basically no description of the other women. It may be because there is no conflict. I thought there would be some kind of plot about the woman from Li Xinlin's family earlier, but considering the length, please give it a try, author.

The idea is clear, but too much ink is wasted on negotiating with mortals. There should be more drama in the part about cultivating immortals.

The subject matter is very novel and quite attractive, keep up the good work

The book is good, the angle is novel, the content structure is also good, the plot is also good, it is a good book It's a very good book. The low rating is mainly because it's a new book. I personally don't think it has any major flaws. It's very interesting. I keep up with the updates every day. I hope the author can give me some help.

Well written, the subject matter is a bit unique.

You can watch the battle of wits and courage with those relatives, but I skipped it if you can't watch the cultivators.

The writing is good, and the storyline is okay, but the pace could be sped up a bit, and sometimes the few pictures are just family trivial matters.