A Blessing for You

At present, all the details are pretty well written, and the characters are very three-dimensional, but I feel that the plot is a bit delayed. After all, it is the story of 93 and Yars. Poor Laoya has not been resurrected after dozens of photos. Judging from the plot direction, he is a taciturn and gentle master and an equally talkative slave. However, I feel that in the later period, 93 will be chatty with Laoya when he can communicate smoothly. It will definitely be 93 at that time. After all, Laoya has no fighting power🌝 and the author will definitely update!

It's good to watch, but I think the male protagonist should be the one who buys the female protagonist. But he died in the fifteenth chapter, and even after more than a hundred chapters, he didn't come back to life. But I infer that it will still be resurrected later, but the cycle should be a bit long. Finally, I would like to say that the writing style of this book is good. It has the feeling of being immersed in the atmosphere of another fantasy world. It is not a direct description, but a sideways portrayal of that world in the narrative. No, is this the answer we've been waiting for so long? The male protagonist we thought died immediately, and we were guessing for a long time whether he would survive, but then you changed the introduction and killed him immediately?!

Where is MD's blessing😢😢😢A knife is sent out every two chapters, it kills me😢😢😢 But the writing is really good, very realistic, and it doesn't look fake😘

The novel description method, as well as the skillful plot construction, coupled with the vague sense of strangeness, do not seem to be a product of this world, but it is unexpectedly fascinating. I am looking forward to the development of the plot. I would like to call this work the novel and best Western fantasy. 👍

I only comment on the story description at the beginning. It is different from the perspective I feel in most of the books I read. It is not the first person, nor the third person in the general sense. It is more like an objective perspective (only describing objective facts without discussing inner feelings), which brings a strong sense of alienation. This made me feel weird when I read it, and I couldn't understand the motivations of the characters' actions. This is the uniqueness of this book. Full marks are given because this is an attempt and respect for innovation. The article written from this perspective can feel like a cruel and numb world. It sounds very much like a child, yes, an autistic child's perspective, silently accepting good and bad things. Let's talk about the plot, world view and characterization. It's not easy overall. The scene description is foggy, dark, cloudy and often rainy. The character structure is a bit silly, and it feels like everyone is pedantic and rule-abiding. The same is true for Yars, especially obviously. By the way, doesn't this guy need to sleep? Restore magic instead of sleep? In any case, the author's unique attempt at a perspective that readers feel (unlike the traditional first-person third-person perspective, similar to a perspective constructed by a person's rational thinking) brings an indescribable sense of alienation. The objective perspective articles I have read feel more like history books. Or a book that generally constructs a logical framework of the world like a chronicle. This kind of book generally has strong logic based on reality and can reveal a lot of hidden information behind it. Therefore, it adopts an objective perspective and readers can also add a lot of content behind the text by themselves. In the field of novels, it is really rare to see stories written from this perspective. Summary based on the discussion: The novelty in form cannot cover up the stagnation in content, which is commendable but not impressive enough.

Blessings to you. The one who is blessed should be No. 93. His master Yars died in a few dozen chapters (maybe he will be resurrected? Or not completely dead), but the subsequent story is also related to his research. All in all, it's fun and novel.

The writing is quite good, but this one is actually about a female protagonist, and Lao Ya is not the male protagonist.

When the hero is hungry, he goes to eat

It looks good, and the author believes in himself greatly.

It's very beautiful, but the rating is too low [thoughts]