The Outcast: A Fortune Reading for Feng Baobao from the Start

The writing is quite smooth, so I'm giving it four stars. However, the author seems to mistake not fighting back or retaliating for being carefree, trying to create a character who takes everything in stride, but neglecting the fact that readers, from the protagonist's perspective, are not people who take everything in stride.

The main character's personality is alright, but it feels like there's hardly any change 🤦. The only changes are that he saved Old Tian and taught Bao'er the Tongtian Talisman. Other than that, there's really very little change.

1. The characters' personalities and thought processes are faithfully reproduced from the original work, which is the best I've ever seen, bar none! There are countless other works online that are simply unreadable. 2. I glanced at the comments section, and someone said, "Don't fight back when attacked, don't talk back when insulted?" Then what do you think should be done?

Up to chapter 58, the character designs are all quite solid, so there are many regrets. The protagonist can't influence the overall situation; it's still just following the plot.

It's not as bad as the reviews say, that's an exaggeration. The protagonist's temperament isn't like the typical wish-fulfillment male leads in Tomato's light novels or other male leads in "Under One Person" who seem to want to be invincible and build a harem. So far, he has his own ideas, which I don't quite understand, but that's still better than building a harem or mindless wish-fulfillment.

I think that when writing fan fiction, you must have your own unique elements. Otherwise, if you just follow the original story, it will be like a monotonous diary and won't be very interesting. The author's explanation of the origin of the Eight Extraordinary Techniques is quite good and insightful.

To put it simply, in the Qing Dynasty, this would be a banned book; in modern times, it's like a student putting their teacher's ideals into practice, but from a different angle, which is much better than those who use the teacher's name to build a harem.

Ah 😲? Clouds ☁️😄, da ...

Yes, yes, I'm really looking forward to the next installment.

This book is really well-written. I don't understand why the score is so low. It feels different from other fanfictions. Of course, I've only read the beginning. But I still couldn't help but comment. This story is truly excellent. However, in my opinion, you need to know the original manga to understand what the earlier chapters are about.